Found it shallow, emotionless and 'rambling' (=unnecessary details included), but the end was ok! Didnt have the chance to take up the Film module during my IB years, so I dunno know what the requirements were for this project. So I judge this as a university film student. anyways, it's still good that you have made this effort. The more you learn about film, the better you 'll get! Dont give up, you're still too young!
A stranger with some constructive criticism: the editing felt awkward in some points. The sound effects for the crash sound too cartoony. Also, you should have introduced the depressed character to new everyday situations to show depression. There are also subtle details thay could have been added for more depth, like a news intro.
My prediction of the ending is this (DONT READ POSSIBLE SPOILER)
I predict that the guy watching the news in the beginning goes back in time and HE is the long driver that kills the man and wife, and that HE is the kid in the car that he crasehs.
very good. I love the plot. constructive criticism: the editing at a few points didn't flow well, but i only saw it once or twice. Keep up the good work!
Found it shallow, emotionless and 'rambling' (=unnecessary details included), but the end was ok! Didnt have the chance to take up the Film module during my IB years, so I dunno know what the requirements were for this project. So I judge this as a university film student. anyways, it's still good that you have made this effort. The more you learn about film, the better you 'll get! Dont give up, you're still too young!
jimmyhe07 3 months ago
A stranger with some constructive criticism: the editing felt awkward in some points. The sound effects for the crash sound too cartoony. Also, you should have introduced the depressed character to new everyday situations to show depression. There are also subtle details thay could have been added for more depth, like a news intro.
TimmyTimeify 6 months ago
@akshay681186 I was close... :)
akshay681186 6 months ago
I'm at 2.23.
My prediction of the ending is this (DONT READ POSSIBLE SPOILER)
I predict that the guy watching the news in the beginning goes back in time and HE is the long driver that kills the man and wife, and that HE is the kid in the car that he crasehs.
akshay681186 6 months ago
a little cheesy effects but over all really good concept and that ending gave me the CHILLS!!!!!!
cooljeep0 1 year ago
a little cheesy effects but over all really good concept
cooljeep0 1 year ago
I love the attention to detail in this movie
jAmssams 1 year ago
very good. I love the plot. constructive criticism: the editing at a few points didn't flow well, but i only saw it once or twice. Keep up the good work!
theslaytonator 1 year ago
Nice short film.
Pudnut 1 year ago
I'm gonna be totally honest. At first I thought it was cliche and... idk. I wasnt in love with it- but the ending man, the ending! Holy shit!
I fucking loved it, and I have no reason to lie to you!
UrSooperJealous 1 year ago