Haunted House/Maison Hantee (French/English)

My first collaboration! Fellow Youtuber and poetess janeczka (http://youtube.com/user/janeczka) and I reciting a poem that she wrote.
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Here I am
In this abandoned house
A house ravaged
By time
And the memories
Sleeping
In its walls
A robbed house
A raped house
It stands there
As though broken into
Unbalanced
Its toys scattered
Its photo albums torn
Its wallpaper faded
No-one could guess...
But between those
Hollow and cracked walls
The screams of
Tormented, violated
But already long gone
Little girls
Still resonate
In the acute silence.

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Entertainment

Tags:

• Poetry
• poem
• spoken
• word
• child
• abuse
• torture
• torment
• pedophilia
• young
• girls
• molestation
• collaboration
• janeczka

[PuppyZwolle]

Collabs are nice.

You probably don't mind me saying I miss your spirit in this.

Pretty powerfull poem,

I like your directness better.

[MsWriteNow]

I find that I like doing Collabs - although I'm never completely happy with how I read other people's work.

[dmio2]

...emotion & spirit & history seared into the walls...

Very cool. Grande prose.

[MsWriteNow]

Yes, I agree...janeczka did a great job writing it.

[hunniebee173]

Wow! This was beautifully done. I've over looked Janeczka, but that is a problem easily remedied. Thanks!

[MsWriteNow]

Oh, if you haven't subscribed to her, you should! She talented and funny!

[andrewnorris1]

Whatever the language the message comes out loudly and full of resonance, bravo for the collaboration

[purefilmphoto]

Beautiful collaboration...

[MsWriteNow]

Yes, aren't janeczka's words great! and I completely agree, there needs to be an art category!

[MsWriteNow]

Thanks, you're so sweet. I think you always look great on your vids, even when you're wearing silly looking flap hats :)

We should definitely do others.