"Skittering Across Cracked Pavement" (Original) DAN BROWN SONGWRITER WEEK!

Thanks for watching everyonee :) Also, much thanks to Dan Brown (aka pogobat) for giving me the extra motivation to finallyyy come up with some instrumentals for a song of mine. I've been wanting to do it forever, and even though this song is pretty simple, I'm soo proud of it.

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LYRICS :)
Your words
Your stare, your smile
Etched into my mind, you're so vindictive
You do anything you'd like because
You know that it'll turn out right for you

I'd like to know
Why you put on such a show, baby
Everybody knows it's just a twisted lie
Like the twist of your lips as they fail to hide

This second side is like a screaming symphony
Harmonzing endlessly in my head

I don't know if I'll ever
Throw it out again
This deafening truth
That I never knew

The way
A single gleam in your eyes
Changes their mind, you addict them
It breaks but makes my heart to see, love
The crowd stumble over their feet for you

I've got to know
Why I love you so, baby
Even though I know you're such a twisted guy
Like the twist of your lips as they fail to lie

This second side is like a screaming symphony
Harmonzing endlessly in my head

I don't know if I'll ever
Throw it out again
This deafening truth
That I never knew

Etched into my mind, you're so vindictive

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[ninji323]

WOW. I like it a lot!!!! Of course there was a few things, but who's gonna focus on that when the rest of it was perfect!!! great job! :D I more than somewhat enjoyed that!

[MistakeWithoutMusic]

@ninji323 thanks so much! i'm planning on adding some stuff to it and changing it up a little bit before i like. legitimately record it & put it together.

:)

[ThePkFreeze]

taping lyrics to the wall..

[MistakeWithoutMusic]

@ThePkFreeze LOLWUT.

[ninji323]

WOW. I like it a lot!!!! Of course there was a few things, but who's gonna focus on that when the rest of it was perfect!!! great job! :D

[Chicago10281]

@MistakeWithoutMusic Have you tried a Roland RD700GX digital piano?

[MistakeWithoutMusic]

@JerseyGuy1856 thankyouuu! you're pretty awesome toooo. :)

[MistakeWithoutMusic]

@055sk lol i didn't think i couldd! this is the first song i've composed, all the other ones i tried to do ended up sucking. thanks xD

[055sk]

Ummm... Wow. You told me you couldnt compose. YOU LIAR!!!!!

[JerseyGuy1856]

@MistakeWithoutMusic yourr the besstt!