Well done great set, good mix of kids. Only thing I would have liked was a more rougher voice throughout. He starts off well and then becomes a little to announcer like. I would also loose the ADO spin on the logo at the end. Kind of a dated look. I'd also look at a couple quick flash cuts or something with an edge. Overall though very cool and way over the top for your first commercial.
Well done..... looks like you've put a lot of effort into this first film class, hope you keep enjoying what you do... all the best for your future :)
great commercial. The lighting and camera work are especially nice.
wild8720 1 year ago
great job!
samdienerphilly 1 year ago
Not bad for your first spot. You have a bright future in advertising! (I've been at this 30 years...)
susanweissman1 1 year ago
Well done great set, good mix of kids. Only thing I would have liked was a more rougher voice throughout. He starts off well and then becomes a little to announcer like. I would also loose the ADO spin on the logo at the end. Kind of a dated look. I'd also look at a couple quick flash cuts or something with an edge. Overall though very cool and way over the top for your first commercial.
ronnoc1999 1 year ago
Very well done! Love the "Top That!' theme. Easy to understand and catchy! Great luck on your future!
Versagal 1 year ago
I like it! And the set is great too ... very early eighties, kind of suits the whole vibe ....
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orla99913 1 year ago
Great job on your first project- Keep up the great work!!! Good to see Vinyl making a come-back- lol.
jeford1222 1 year ago
Great lighting. Good action and the music level is perfect. Kitmair
kitmair 1 year ago
Well done..... looks like you've put a lot of effort into this first film class, hope you keep enjoying what you do... all the best for your future :)
OzBamboo 1 year ago
Great work. Love the look and feel. You captured the message and essence. Looking forward to seeing you on Madison Ave one day soon.
icreatebuzz 1 year ago