My Edinboro Commercial.mov

My entry for the Edinboro University Great Commercial Contest. Make sure you vote for me at http://www.eupcontest.com/

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[shadowfever44]

I don't understand why people don't like this video. the pictures in the background show off the nice features of the boro campus, therefore promoting and attracting people to come tour the place. good vid. hope you win

[CodyHandel09]

Thank you! I really appreciate that, because honestly thats what i was going for with the commercial. Please Rate, and Vote if you havn't yet. Thank you

[kairotist]

Well you did something right because none of the other videos have discussions like this going, even though the one where the football player tackles the kid is hysterical, and the homeless guy one is way more insulting. It's true though, it turns edinboro into a punchline and not much more. For a freshman doing it alone though, not bad.

[CodyHandel09]

lol im a sophomore

[vickaronomie]

This is bad.

[kairotist]

I don't know about the worst one, but they're right- this isn't that good. Shock value, bad levels, unconvincing effects and frankly it doesn't make the University look good- it's actually kind of insulting. Sorry.

[Herbolsa]

well the difference between me and you is that at leas you are proud of the shithole we go to that you call a school... thats not me :) as much as i hate Edinboro ill go for this commercial any day!!!

[MsKittyboy]

Great Commercial! Humorous to capture attention of the audience and make them want to check out the university on the web. Terrific Job!

[conure1owner]

You know what would make this great... just a little change- if you added a spoken line in the beginning: "Let us begin the tour" or something like that and it might make more sense.

[CodyHandel09]

I see where you are coming from about only mentioning it, my idea was with the green screen all the pictures behind him are from the university and wanted the focal point of the commercial to be the clapping and changing. The outfit is for humor and the superbowl is supposed to be funny. oh and that is my friend josh that stars in this film.

[conure1owner]

I actually think it's a good film with a funny joke. The greenscreen is entertaining and there's obviously a reason all these people like it. The only reason I don't think it's a good commercial is because it doesn't promote edinboro, it just mentions it.  My hat is off to you for wearing that outfit, too.

[CodyHandel09]

i love constructive critasism. Thats how you know what needs improved. This is my first time working with the green screen so yeah it may be a little off. But I love film and it is my major. If its an "embarrassment" i would love to know why. Thanks for the luck