POLL: What are your thoughts on my project?(1/3)
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Everyone has to start somewhere, and this is a decent start. Get good enough and I'll be the one asking you to animate my web comic series :)
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6:40 u broke the law...she should of said - laaaaaaaaw!!!
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good work just some things but i think yo got your input on that maybe you could get some other people to help you with the voices
cricketol 1 month ago
@cricketol
Thanks yo! Yeah, there's a possibility of getting some help with some of the voices. I got the dudes covered I think, but a girl's voice is hard even with the morphvox. I got an offer from a chick with kickass voice talents though.
ChelevSaRa 1 month ago
Two points of criticism about production quality:
1. You can do wonders with transparent layers and alpha blending. For example having separate layers for background & lighting, or even just adding a darker transparent layer on top can make things look much better.
2. Similar things can be done for audio with parallel tracks, for example you could use altered voice on one track and equalizer or bass boost on another, then adjust the volume levels until it starts to sound more natural.
Nuihc88 4 months ago
@Nuihc88
I'll see what I can do with that. Thank you =D
ChelevSaRa 4 months ago
yeah the story is awesome if only you could improve a little the artwork
KOPLance 4 months ago
@KOPLance
Okie! Yeah, I definitely got a little lazy with the backgrounds, animations, and inanimate objects. Could be worth redoing I guess. Thanks for sharing your thoughts :)
ChelevSaRa 4 months ago