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Uploaded by on Oct 12, 2008

PLEASE READ AUTHORS NOTE!(at beginning and the end)
[AN. Okay Im going to skip like a week in the story so it moves more smoothly and so I dont bore you guys as well as myself. So the Sunday after the talk with Joe & Rachel was Frankies 8th birthday and it was awesome. Rachel got him a really cool gift; use your imagination because you know I dont have one, XD.
Song in vid: See you in the Dark by Honor SocietyI love this song and the dance.]

Recap: Read Chapter 14 first.

Chapter 15 pt 1

*New Character*

Brian Hayes ~ Senior, football player, good looking, charming, class clown, nice guy? Who knows, maybe.

*Normal POV*

*its the 2nd week of October, its Monday and lunchtime. Rachel is sitting with Nick, Sarah and 3 of their other friends talking and laughing.*

Sarah:*laughing, suddenly stops*
Rachel: What?
Sarah:*whispering* Someone is coming up behind you.
Rachel:*whispering back* Who?
Sarah: Brian Hayes
Rachel: Why is he-
Brian: Hey
Rachel:*half turning her body to look at him* Hey, whats up?
Brian: Rachel, can I talk to you in the hallway? [AN. What does he want to talk about??? 0_0 lol youll find out soon enough.]
Rachel: Um, sure. *she gathers her stuff, throws her trash away, and turns back to Sarah giving her a confused but curious look, which is returned, she follows Brian into the hall*
Brian:*stops in an empty hallway and turns toward Rachel*
Rachel:*leaning against the wall* Sowhatd you want to talk about? *she was confused because sure they were friendly in class but she didnt considered him a friend, and he seemed a little nervous which was odd for him*
Brian:* looked up and stared into her blue eyes with his brown ones* Okay, well I like you, and I think youre pretty*pause* I was wondering if you wanted to be my date to the Homecoming Dance?
Rachel:*she was speechless, that was not what she was expecting, he thinks she is pretty and wants to go on a date with her, her mind was blown* --- *she still couldnt say anything no matter how much she wanted to*
Brian:*sad* Okay, sorry I asked. *whispering* I knew I should have worked up the nerve to ask sooner. *he starts to walk away*
Rachel:*jogs after him and grabs his arm to stop him* Brian. *he looks at her* I would love to go to Homecoming with you. *smiles*
Brian: Really? *starts to smile really big*
Rachel: Yeah. *the bell rings* Oh, I have to go find Nick we have to go to Math class, can you meet me at my locker after school?
Brian: Sure
Rachel: Okay, great, bye. *walks away*

*Rachel finds Nick & Sarah talking by her locker, obviously waiting for her. As soon as they saw her they got that so, what happened? look on their faces. Rachel walks up.*

Sarah: Sowhat happened?
Rachel:*feigning innocence* What ever do you mean? Come on Nick we cant be late again. *she walks away*
Nick: Ill find out what happened.
Sarah: See that you do. *they part ways and go to class*

* Its after school and as Rachel is heading to her locker she sees Brian leaning against it, looking the other way.*

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[AN. It was too long so read part 2.]

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  • ahhh!!!! omgg i sniff drama!

  • lmao XD

  • well theyre amazing! No guy can be as good as them! haha! actually they're tied with edward cullen if u count my imagination too :)

    -lindsay

  • so do the jonas brothers...other than joes klutziness..(which mades him more adorable cause im a klutz too) they are damn near perfect

  • possibly lol!

    i dont know, he seems to good to be true if u know what i mean

    -lindsay

  • why dont you like brian.. he seems nice to me..is it cause you like the jobros more???

    =)

  • well nck coul have told him :P! lol! i dont like brian :[

    -lindsay

  • oh...well joe doesnt go to school w/ nick and rachel so he didnt know about the dance but i get what you mean...and too bad!!! brian asked her and she said yes so deal with it XD

  • no! ask her to the homecoming dance! but that would be nice to!

    -lindsay

  • joe ask her what?? you mean ask her out??

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