Timing out in spots. Pedal point - pedal far too soft. Where was the molto rall? The slow movement needs MUCH more rubato. Wrong harmony in spots [nerves?]. Staccatos must be very staccato [Franck]. Staccato must be used in final chorale in manual part.
[PS: I studied this with Jean Langlais - that makes me a know-all [lol] !!!!!!!!!]
Timing out in spots. Pedal point - pedal far too soft. Where was the molto rall? The slow movement needs MUCH more rubato. Wrong harmony in spots [nerves?]. Staccatos must be very staccato [Franck]. Staccato must be used in final chorale in manual part.
[PS: I studied this with Jean Langlais - that makes me a know-all [lol] !!!!!!!!!]
gerardbedecarter 1 year ago
Just a wee bit slower. Little less 16' and little more 4' to brighten it up somnewhat - it is a bit muddy in the opening.
But nicely done - You have talent for sure.
octave4 3 years ago 2
Even if I was as good as you, there's no way they would ever let me play at my school. So kudos for you!
Also I'm deathly afraid of suits, I'd get nervous performing in one.... it's a really wierd pet peeve of myne.
codeman2008 3 years ago