Angel Eyes - A film by R.D. Womack II

A psychotic man captures a helpless young woman and tortures her.

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Film & Animation

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• Angel
• Eyes
• music

[TheLegoKiller]

wait wait.... so his friend is his wall?

[Rdwomack]

@TheLegoKiller Yessir. I can't wait to make the feature film. Its going to be a lot of fun exploring his character.

[midprod]

nice, I think the less u showed the better, a lot of people get it wrong and show to much blood, but u left a lot up to the imagination, great job on this Rudy, not to mention it looked awesome the lighting and the shadows was perfect u really found ur main skills and honed in on them

[RamsesReturns]

Ohhh poor guy... would that make him feel better? Sorry I am not feeling it nor can I appreciate the work. Thumbs down for me.

[ChiStarX]

It would have flowed better if spoken in almost a gloating tone, like he's better than his mother or the world staring and hating him. I would have liked to see more of the girl too, to become more empathetic with her and feel uncomfortable with the whole situation.

But overall I think this came together pretty well and you're getting much better at character development. ^_^

[ChiStarX]

Definitely a Rudi movie, with language and exclusively close shots. I'm glad it all came together so nicely ^^

I actually have to agree with the comment below me to a point. I think for the level of hysteria he sounds to be in this probably wouldn't be such a pre-meditated abduction. With how upset he is it would have been a very quick, sudden, attack probably done outside rather than him drawing and indulging in the pain he's putting the girl through.

[PsychopathUltimate]

He sounds a bit too whimpery with his past. Too desperate; to the point where he just sounds pathetic and insecure; not psychotic as if his perception were warped. I think your emphasized dialog was what over done it; lines like "I cried". Also his tone of voice is far too tortured. I understand that he's supposed to be sad, but I just feel that one aspect is over done where the other that would make the character interesting is far too underdone.