Nested Loops and Powerful Secrets
Uploader Comments (GeorgeWHutton)
All Comments (9)
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This started out awesome but you got busted at 1:07
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This is an awesome example of nested loops man! Thanks
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learn't more from the comments than from the video. Including George's reply to superAweber. nahual9's you rock. Anyway nice effort. One can get the idea how nested "looped".
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dude you are so awesome
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Maybe you should join toastmasters
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Do I really need to give this 5 stars....hmm, thank you for the suggestion. ;)
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George,
May I suggest working on the following:
Your tonality: it's too soothing and a bit monotoned. Put color in your voice. By color, I mean, 'emotional value' (if a moment in your story is happy...then sound happy...sad, sound sad, etc.) Also, create anticipation by pausing and pacing.
Limit self-point anchors and overuse of hand gestures. They're distracting. And stop sweeping away your viewers images before they even see them.
Watch this video example, key-in: Garrett 2 of 4
Oh yeah. well you're misusing the technique.
Very typical for marketers to make a big promise in their headline eg "Nested Loops and Powerful Secrets" then fail to deliver on them in the content.
superAweber 7 months ago
@superAweber
Thanks for the feedback. Would you kindly drop a link to your video showing the proper use the technique? Thanks.
GeorgeWHutton 7 months ago