i became better
i actualized
u stuck
stayed stuck
it sucked
pushin the puck
by myself
what luck
said to myself
better pass this buck
take it off the shelf
i was playin wit myself
u writin terms u abide by urself
ain't no more time
to say the rhyme by myself
better cancel this equation
i'm doin fine by myself
cos i had no business bein wit u no more
i was soarin
u dead borin
livin the weakest
u were just ignorin
the life u chose
so i rose
up and out of it
i didn't fit wit u no more
u bout never knew the score
how close i was to bowin out
u barely barked
u didn't hardly shout
u just retreated into ur bed
u never tried to get ahead
ur face never red
from bein ashamed
ur soul was dead
i think it's fair to claim
and after the lightning
bound to come some rain
and it ain't justified
all the pain u cause
but now i'm rectified
cos i've trained my flaws
i'm mostly tearless
thas right, mostly fearless
cos u don't make me cry no more
u ain't even worth me
gettin down no more
so i hit the town
and get down some more
on the dancefloor
i'm lovin life,
so much to grab that u just ignore
but i ain't here to settle this score
naw, i'm just here to create more
ways to withstand
bein sad, boring and poor
shore up ur feelings
cos i basically abhor
what u stand for
or rather sit for
or rather lie for
and i'm much more
than i used to be
ain't quite free
but i'm on my way
and as u see
it's workin out my way
cos i've set it up to play out that way
and i'm out the house all day today
but if u wanna stop//bop/drop
by, work it out and say
how sorry u r
how proud u r
that i've made my way
thas fine by me
i'll take it any day
but i ain't waitin around
cos i'm made this way
and u stayed the same
no matter what u say
and my story's tight
anyone'll say
and ur words r trite
no matter what u pray
and i'm livin right
not for judgement day
but for the path i walk
all along the way
u heard me right,
i'm livin it my way
cos i'm beyond the fray
so say hip hip hooray
i ain't down wit opp
but i'm down wit
l-i-l o-l m-e
spirit war girl,two opposites to make the real you.but one of the opposites wants to be God............
mickwillie1 1 year ago
this is the second time i've come to one of her videos and been awed by the talent...5/5....and i'm subscribing. that was the shit
crunkboyfresh 3 years ago 2
oooh you are soo good
damdoom12 3 years ago
You are a great poet! I would buy your book.
JusticeLeague9 3 years ago
1 star .. damn people are critics.
People should stop being so rude and negative online. Life is to short to always be like that.
Zeemis 3 years ago
who cares what you think. Everyone else here disagrees.
skeetrosauce 3 years ago
your words present an imagery thats good and u have alot of quality dont worrt about the negativity be postive an keep posting but pronoucate better so people can hear u an ur message ur words are strong so keep it up but be more presentable
floeticlove 4 years ago
you look like you could use a shower. or a bullet. either one works with me (except id prefer the latter).
mrkrono 4 years ago
Im feeling this.
BenDutta 4 years ago
WAT UP DAWG
cyberbunnie 4 years ago