Master and Margarita

The lyrics don't fit entirely with the song, I know... I'm still working things out. The first verse works, and the general chord progression is in place. This is my first song. Don't be too rough... It's still a work in progress. I'm only halfway through with the lyrics
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Let me tell you all a story
bout a very lonely man
bout that evening long ago
When his long-lived life began.
bout that quiet winter evening
If he only knew it then

She was treading through the snow
Down the hill that has no end,
He was waiting down below
Never knew for whom or when.
It got cold, he did not go,
She saw him standing there and then

He got her a bouquet of flowers,
He wanted to things right.
She breathed in the sweet aroma
And she held him tight.
He said I cant go on without you,
No, not another day.
She said
Ok

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• new
• original
• love
• song

[amdestuiani]

what does this have to do with master and margarita? :|

[yadabkc]

good job man!!!