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You Are Mine~A Jacob and Renesmee Story~Chapter Thirteen

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Uploaded by on Apr 30, 2010

Chapter thirteen
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Bella Cullen was still. In the middle of all the chaos, she couldn't bring herself to move. She stood in front of the garage at the Cullen house, a light backpack hugging her shoulders, while the wolfs and vampires raced around preparing for battle.

They weren't sure of the distance to Kyle's house, and they had to be ready. They could move quickly but the wolfs would need food. Bella wasn't sure what else they could possibly be packing, but they were stressed out nonetheless.


"Bella," Edward murmured, sneaking up behind her and sliding his hands around her waist, "we're going to get our daughter back."

Bella said nothing.
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"They're coming," Kassy hissed. "they're coming for her, Kyle, just like you said."

Kyle smiled. Just like he planned.

"Who's coming Kyle?" Renesmee asked, wide eyes staring lovingly at his evil face.

"Just some friends," Kyle replied, laughing to himself. Friends, they definitely weren't.

"How can she know?"

"Kassy has a special gift, Nessie," Matiana replied, "just like you do. Kassy can tell if we are in danger. It's a very helpful gift."

Nessie squinted her eyes in concentration. Thinking was becoming harder each day. She wasn't even herself anymore but now it was nearly impossible to think straight. All part of Kyle's effect on her, of course.

"But Kyle...said they were..friends..." she whispered, trying to get the words out before she lost her train of thought completely.

"Hush now dear, don't strain yourself," Matiana urged.

Stupid brat, Kyle thought. She just wouldn't give up. Her brain was stubborn, but soon it would completely give and Kyle would be in control.

That's what Kyle could do to you. That's what Kyle took advantage of. And that is what lead Kyle to believe that he could use Renesmee as bait to get rid of the Cullen family once and for all.

His family would be in control then. They would work slowly and kill off all the humans, saving a few useful ones and turning them into powerful young vampires. Eventually, the world would be his. All because the Cullens believed the little lie that Kyle's family knew Eleazer.

Oh, they knew him all right. Had fun burning up his family too. They were long gone. Dead. Eleazer, Kate, Tanya..all of them. And the Cullens were next.

Kyle knew he would win. As soon as the good guys were out of his way.
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Please answer these questions or just leave a quick comment on your thoughts. It will really help me write the next few chapters!

1. Eleazer's family is dead. Did that come as a surprise to you? Or does it not really matter?

2. What do you think about what Kyle is doing to Renesmee? Do you think she will snap out of it?

3. Now that you know more about Kyle and his plan, what do you think? Why are so many vampires (his family) willing to be on his side?

4. Who do you think will win in the end?

5. Predictions for future chapters? What do you WANT to happen?

Thanks guys! ¡Te amo! (I love you!)~Sorry if that isn't right, my spanish sucks xP

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  • I just found this story and im in love with it please continue

  • love it more plz

  • post more NOW

    

  • this was posted in 2010 are you going to post any mor or not its almost 2012

  • POST THE NEXT CHAPER! I LOVE THIS STORY!

  • Your story is really good please post the next chapter it is so freaky

    I wanna know what happens next

    i wanna see carlisle fighting with the oldest one and Bella or Edward with Kassy and Jacob is coming because he sudddenly realize that he has to help Nessie and murder Kyle

    Yes and than they are going home and helping Nessie to get her memories back they show her everything but she can't remember then Jacob kisses her and she would have all her memories back

    That would be a good ending

  • have you stopped writting? its been about a year since you last posted

  • Fourteen please?

  • fourteen?????

  • where is fourteen??

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