Little Girl, Big Liar [DEMO] Music Video

A music video to go along with my demo for Little Girl, Big Liar.

Love,
Hayley Jane
AKA Kate
la fae violette

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Hayley Jane
• new album
• demo
• little girl big liar
• music video
• cabaret
• gothic
• circus
• vintage
• vaudeville
• burlesque
• make-up

[kelseymg13]

you said "when I slipped and fall" and your verbs don't match! slipped is past tense and fall is present tense! I love the song but that part bothers me sooooo much :(

[candycabaret]

@kelseymg13 Except for that fact I say "slip and fall" and not "slipped and fall". I wouldn't mix verbs! I love English too much!

[DiegosLover33]

I can totes see nips at 0:32

niiiiice

[candycabaret]

@DiegosLover33 You know it! :D

[aliyabarter]

hate this song, hate this video. unlike every body else.

[candycabaret]

But why do you hate it?

I'm not being antagonistic, I really would like to know. What are your criticisms?

Love,

Hayley Jane

[ArabellaMuerte]

You should totally reupload this with the full song from "idiot child"....I love it :)

[batgaff]

I like this. Can i offer some constrauctive thoughts though?

I like the quiet, almost whispered part of the song, but to carry it all the way through means the sound isnt textured. At around the 1 min mark when you enter the next phrase, I would be tempted to come away from the acoustic entirely and get some distorted guitar, maybe some drums, (just fills, not a pattern), maybe increase the tempo slightly. Increase your vocal volume to become more shouty and angry, return to acoustic and fade

[kelseymg13]

@candycabaret lol, just listened to it more carefully and I stand corrected :) Now I love the song in ALL of it's entirety :D

[logankowarsky]

so sincere and actually awesome. best of all, your voice is sooo soothing :) refreshing to see some artists on here

[tsukikyou]

Very interesting

[cecilia924]

i think you shouldn't listen to any negative comments.i think this is really good. i notice someone said something about the song being very simple and the lyrics being forced...well, everyones opinions are different and i disagree completely. regardless, if it took you a year or 5 minutes to write, i like it a lot. as long as what you do makes YOU happy and you're comfortable doing it and happy with it then do it how YOU want.