Serenity (Pilot) Teaser
Uploader Comments (tsinclai2002)
All Comments (2)
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May be some many speaked text in begin. This is bad solution. Music is better. Thanks for work!
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I think it's really good, but it makes badger seem like he's the main bad guy, when in reality (Or tv reality) Blue sun and the alliance are the evil ones. Oh and the reavers... though they are the alliances fault...
Two by two... Hands of blue...
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it definitely *is* hard not to spoil this (especially with that nagging voice that tells you Fox already did this, as well as the opening credits!)
I like it, although the beginning could have used some sort of music, nothing intrusive, just something soft and ambient, subtly building towards where the beats kick in (awesomely, I might add) and then maybe pick up that ambient hum again during the final "wheel keeps turning"
Thanks for the perceptive comments! I struggled with this for some time, trying to come up with a style that seemed to work. I only started working with video about three weeks ago, so I'm still learning about pacing, editing and all the rest of that stuff.
tsinclai2002 5 years ago