Jemi One-Shot // part one.

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Uploaded by on Oct 4, 2009

This is not gonna be series, obviously. It's just one thing I made cause I got really bored. You might wanna listen to the song in the video, you'll get the right effect. Comment, if you want more things like this.
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Water & Waves...

Demis POV
I cant believe it. Its like a dream come true, like all my prayers have been answered. Cutest guy in school asked me out. To the Valentines day ball. Not to mention that I have a huge crush on him, since like, the day I was born? Okay, so it happened just few days ago but Im still thrilled about it. Like, who wouldnt? It was the end of the school day and I was walking towards my locker. I seemed to be invisible, as always. But then, boom, he was standing infront of me. He seemed to be kind of nervous or worried about something, but he didnt want me to notice it. In low voice, just like he was embarrased to be seen around me, he asked: „You going to the ball on Friday?" For a second, I just stood there. In this second I thought about so many things. Why is he talking to me? Or is there someone behind me? I checked and there was nobody. Which brings us back to the question why is he talking to ME? „N-no, I think. Nobody hasnt asked me." I was freaked out. Why would he care about me and if Im going to the ball? „Would you come if Id ask you?" Okay, who saw that coming? Not me. I was speachless. I guess he had expected that, because he just stood there. Really patiently, I have to mention. After I found my voice again, I asked: „A-are you.. Are you asking me to the ball?" And then he gave me the answer i was never waiting for. Simple, only three letters, but still so unexpectable. „Yes." I swear, if I wouldnt drank so much coffee in this morning, I wouldve just fainted. All I managed to say was plain „Oh.." He thought for a minute and said then: „Im going to meet you in the middle of the dance floor at 7pm sharp," and with that he placed a soft kiss on my forehead. Now its Friday, 4.30 pm and Im standing infront of my mirror. For that special evening my mom had bought me a simple blue dress, which reminded me the water. And the waves. After that one day when Joe asked me out, Ive become quite popular. Well.. People notice me now. And Taylor, the meanest girl in school whos point of life is make mine horrible, is nice to me now. Or it just seems like that to me because Ive been so happy for a while now. I think Im just imaging it, because how nice can dumping milk on my head be? Not really, but somehow it doesnt hurt me like it did before. I glanced over at my clock and it reminded me that I should get going to the school if I want to be there on time. So I grabbed my purse and jogged downstairs, blue dress flowing behind me. My mom gave me a quick kiss on the cheek and I waved goodbye to her. School isnt far away from my house, so i decided to take a walk cause its almost impossible to ride a car with heels like Im wearing. After 10 minutes I entered the school. The music came from the gym and I made my way towards it. I went inside and took my phone from my purse. While checking the time from my phone I felt some eyes on me, but I could care less at the moment. It was 6.58 pm. 2 minutes and Im supposed to meet Joe in the middle of the dance floor. I saw him there, standing, his hands in his pockets. I went to him and he grinned. „I cant believe you actually came." I smiled shyly and replied: „Yeah, I cant believe that too." And what happened in next 15 minutes is most hurtful thing that ever happened to me. I saw Taylor coming over and passing Joe 10 dollars. „Nice job, Joey" she smiled and walked away. I couldnt believe my eyes. I felt how tears started to fall and I ran to the beach. I cant believe I was just a bet. Just a stupid, nothing meaning bet. I sat down on the beach and just cried and stared to the water and waves. The wind was making my dress wrap around my legs. I looked at them and got an idea. Blue, water, waves... I got up and walked to the water. I walked and walked until the cold took the control over my body and I collapsed to the ice cold water...
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Whatcha' think? Let me now. Cause if I suck at making things like this, then I won't do it any more. I promise. :))

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  • AMAZING!!

    Whats the song?!

    i LOVE it!! Haha x

    and it goes perfectly with the story :P x

    <3

  • Thanks.

    The Fray - Never say never

  • ... i seriously dont know what to say...

    oh except you could make a 2nd part to this all about how Joe realized what he did and how it was a bone-head move :D

    PLEASE PLEASE DO cuz im hating Joe right now and i seriously dont want to :(

  • aww , don't hate him.

    go , read my other series, he's nice there.

    but after all comments i've got, i'm seriously thinking about second part of this.

  • thanks for making this

  • you're welcome ,

    I hope you liked it :)

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  • this was so amazing.."I walked and walked until the cold took control over my body and I collapsed to the ice cold water.." I loved this, im a sucker for sad stories..poor Demi! You are GOOD at making these stories! don't think your not..

  • Omg, this is amazing! I'm in loveeeeeee!

  • i was listening to my playlist why i was reading and the song stand in the rain (by superchick) came on and it reminded me of this so much for some reason

  • ohhh this was REALLY REALLY good!

    you should do something where they find her and JOE is feeling guilty. haha

  • Well that was good, but yet sad. I kinda had build up my hopes for a happy ending. Hahahahaha But it was really amazing. Poor Demi tho.

  • LOVED IT :D

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