Mass Effect Movie: Shepard Origin Part 10 (fan made)

Part 10 - "The Conclusion". Video storytelling of Commander Shepard's origin story written by a big fan of Mass Effect.

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• mass
• effect
• movie
• film
• commander
• shepard
• script
• story
• plot
• colonist
• origin
• first
• contact
• war
• femshep
• female

[AssassinsReign]

I liked the story except for chapter 9 where shep does that seductive crap with the batarian slavers. That does not at all need to be in this. Also , I've always rooted for Trent to get with Shep at the end so if that was to happen I would have liked it more, but that's just my opinion.

[simongenius1]

@AssassinsReign true true. i'll change part 9 later and re-upload. LOL. Trent and Shep getting together would be a cool arc. But it's not done in the format of a romantic comedy. WHY would Femshep suddenly fall in love with renegade mShepard? Did he do something awesome in the battle? He was kind of cowardly from what I remember.

[mlwillful]

The story is good, however I could see die hard gamers being mad that the other games will not fully agree with the movie in ME 1-3. Dialogue could use some work, also shepard appears somewhat weaker than expected in the movie and much less outspoken. I like trent and tommy I feel they makes for a great story. also the fat cook adds humor to the story. overall it is good it just does not match 100% with ME story for later movies. the presence of wrex and joker is arguable.

[simongenius1]

@mlwillful I appreciate the comment once again. I should really put up a annotation that says it's not meant to be 100% match the story of the game. Name me a successful adaption that matched 100% to the source material? I agree with you 100% that dialogue needs work. I've just casted voice actors to supplement important dialogue scenes e.g. Trent flirting with Femshep. Femshep is weaker here to humanise her. In ME1, she's too badass to be relatable, but origin story explains how she got there.

[KristianNox]

Thank you so much I am making my own story thanks you too. If i send you the story would u read it. You became my hero in writing

[simongenius1]

@KristianNox I think good writer suppose to read widely. I don't really do that. But i will start by reading your story with two conditions: 1) if you are writing on a topic that I like (e.g. mass effect stuffs) and 2) if YOU think it's good.

[AssassinsReign]

@simongenius1 Well the logical way to do that is to assert a slowly changing character for Trent. Since they are friends now, he slowly but surely realizes just how much of a cocky bastard he was :D Then, develop the relationship from there. A great example is on Fanfiction (the website), a story called "Two to Tango".

[KristianNox]

Do you have skype I might contact you on? you can PM me I still use the Old Youtube layout

[simongenius1]

@cobchob Ok i saw your lego creation. LOL. Good work.

Liara is a love interest. She's the one you meet on Eden Prime. Ashley is already on your team. Liara is a prothean expert and Saren is looking for a prothean artefact. Her reason to join is the MOST reasonable, followed by Tali (Geth expert), followed by Garrus (Turian/Spectre expert) and lastly Wrex. Unless Shepard pays him.

[cobchob]

@simongenius1 Well, they don't have to join at the same time. You can actually recruit Liara after you've blown up the Krogan breeding plant on Virmire(?)

and I always thought Wrex should be on a different planet, I mean, it doesn't really fit his character to be on the Citadel, does it?

Also, (and this is basically self advertising :P) as a huge fan of ME, I have decided to construst the map "Firebase: white" out of Lego bricks. If you have time, you should check it out! v1 is on my channel.