Contradiction- Don't Fu[n]k Up Our Beats Contest IV Entry

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This is my submission for Funk Volume's Don't Fu[n]k Up Our Beats contest. Let me know what you think. Feedback is appreciated, and if you like it then make sure to vote for me in the contest!

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Music

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• Funk Volume
• Don't Fu[n]k Up Our Beats
• contest
• rap

[ADre3762]

quite bro, well you still can!!

[OfficialDeejayW]

@ADre3762 Well, at least my rapping is better than your spelling. That's a plus, so... thanks.

[alexfloyd12]

Man, Ur Dope Straight from Fonixdarapper don't listen 2 these niggas/hater ass whiteboys

[OfficialDeejayW]

@alexfloyd12 Thanks man! I appreciate it

[Toddd107]

not bad my man, i enjoyed it your flow was dope as fuck

[OfficialDeejayW]

@Toddd107 Thanks! I'm glad to hear it haha it seems like my flow has gotten mixed reviews

[TheUncutTV]

ill



[MJzFTW]

Im LOLing

-Channel owners friend

[DeanoTheBigD]

@OfficialDeejayW Flow gets an B

Rhyme gets an A

U just need to work on ur voice. That is the best thing about a rapper. Look at wayne. His songs make almost no sense and are trash and he made it big. (some say its cause of bird man or somethin but i dont know) but his voice is slightly cool....sorta. Point being: If u work on ur voice and make it sound nice I think u'll do great.

[maxitoh23]

@dirtydeadpresident you d-e-f-i-n-i-t-e-l-y need to learn how spell

[TOOGOODER]

Good thing this isnt a rapping contest

[superbay82]

iniquity is way better

[mattfried74]

it was decent just a bit corny at times

[FALL3NPROD1GY]

the flow was ill, but the lyrics themselves could be tweaked, but all in all,4/5 keep swaggin bro!mad potential

[jacoblevi99]

I KILL ALL YALL CHECK OUT HUNTER HADLEY G SHOCK

[subbacultcha91]

You have good metaphors. You have potential.