This is me singing a song i wrote called Don't
lol [it rhymes]. anyway enjoy.
no bad comments constructive critisim is welcome.
wacth in HD
dont
Forget about me when your gone
When youve left this home
Ill be waiting
If you call
Ill come running baby
Through the coldest weather
Through the rain or hail
Throw at me what ever
Ill be there to come and bail
Cause baby even though your gone
These feelings are still strong
You may not love me
But I love you like no one could
Life is a long road
dont make me do it alone
You may not want be
But no one wants you like no one do s
dont
Lock me outside
In the cold
Where I have no home
Give love a chance
Cause I dont want this to end
The moment that you leave me
Your gonna wish you didnt
A empty life of misery
But I still knock at your door
Cause baby even though your gone
These feelings are still strong
You may not love me
But I love you like no one could
Life is a long road
dont make me do it alone
You may not want be
But no one wants you like I do
[Adlibbing]
dont
Forget about me when your gone
When youve left this home
Try opening ur mouth a little bit more on the shorter words, it should make the sound better. Its good, really good but would be better with music
KatTasker 2 years ago
I Remember This
LOL
stargirlzstar 2 years ago
you silly girl why where you laghing. you should know that you can sing better than patrice.if you make another song say my name in it okay.
ohduhh 2 years ago
vgood =] but u were laughin at the end
purpleprinc1 2 years ago
thats funny but good y were u laughin lool
girlbettanoe 2 years ago
I dnt get it
are you inlove
beettee20056 2 years ago
Hiya
I Think This Is Better Than Others
Is This About The Football Guy??
stargirlzstar 2 years ago
i am actually surprised it did not think you would be able to pull this off but you did and you were quite voice the vocals can improve but still they were quite good they were acceptable you can only get better but remember you cant LAUGH lol and btw who do you want to win on Britains Got Talent except for Susan Boyle coz i know i want Shaun Smith to win
YouTeenSTORY 2 years ago
wow you shocked me your pretty good ps the song is good.
you just a fan♥
UnderWorldPenguin 2 years ago
tremendous song
rochesterpopulist 2 years ago