That's the entire part one of my alternative series' first episode "A New Beginning"... is Not that good... but it was a little hard to make...
-Synopsis:
After the time was reseted, The Elders call Leo to save Prue and Piper, he arrives to the manor and discover that the situation is really bad so he heals them and Prue ask for Phoebe, Suddenly Cole appears really disturbed and mad, he just can't talk. Unfortunately the source caugth her, and after reseted time he killed her, to destroy 'The Power of Three' and there was nothing that Cole could do to stop him.
Prue and Piper can't believe that their baby sister is really gone, and they tried everything to bring her back, spells, potions and when they saw that nothing works, Prue decided to summon The Angel of Death to make him help her, but he couldn't and he try to make her understand, that there's nothing that him, they or anybody can do to save her, that their destiny have changed.
The source gat furious because Cole could escape, and hes abssesed with kill him, but his seer, give him a bigger revelation, something about reconstitute 'The Power of Three', something about aomeone who's going to start a new destiny for everybody and because of this vision the source order to kill her before she could even know the sister.
After all of their pain, and their suffer, Prue and Piper, finally realize that her sister is gone for good, Piper get EXTREMLY depressed and she refuse their destiny, Prue try to stand strong to help piper to get trought this, and together finally discover that their destiny is let her sister go, and save sombody else, somebody who's strangely connected with them.
Starring:
Holly Marie Combs
Rose McGowan
and Shannen Doherty as "Prue"
Brian Krause
Julian McMahon
Dorian Gregory
Created by:
Constance M. Burge
Adapted by:
Harold V. Torre
Guest Starring:
Finola Hughes
Jennifer Rhodes
James Read
Simon Templeman
and Wendy Phillips as Sister Agnes
Producer
Holly Marie Combs
Producer
Shannen Doherty
Directed By
Harold V. Torre
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Enjoy! =)
Can I make a suggestion? I absolutely love this but I feel that the realisation Pheobe is dead a bit sudden. Perhaps if you can source some material from a previous time she, Cole and Leo are in the underworld and show her get burned as she tries to escape with Leo (or Cole). Then when they realise she is dead it will make more sense to us as the viewers. Just a suggestion. It might just make your opening more believable and udnerstandable. Besides that the whole thing is wonderfully done.
rentlover1 3 years ago 2
actually the episode is almost done... this part was redone too... and i think its only fair to le it that way... when prue died... no one could explain or see her exact moment of demice... cuz of all the problems... so the WB decided to not show her at all letting her death a little bit on the viewer imagination... that's actually what i'm doing since you can see the exact moment when Phoebe gets killed you just has to imagine it... like we all did with Prue!
litokun91 3 years ago
Amazing!!! It looked so real! 5* and favorited!!! :)
LoveDancingMusic 3 years ago
thx! =)
litokun91 3 years ago
Okey! that's Cool! but I don't get the cole part "where's phoebe?" and then yell?!
ShadowOfTheWitches 3 years ago
well... the in the video Trailer of this episode is the complete summary of the episode... when leo heal piper and prue, prue ask for phoebe, suddenly cole arrieves from the underworld completely disturb cuz he couldn't save her... and then he screams!
litokun91 3 years ago