I was going to end this movie, I really honestly was. But soccershannon27 and a few other people knocked some sense into me. Their comments made me realize something. Writing is what I love to do. I should write because I love to, not for the praise. So what if I don't get as many comments as I want? Writing is what I love to do. It's been the one thing I've wanted to do, for nearly seven years. I started writing when I was 12, I started writing for ME. No one read my stories. I wrote them because it was what I'm passionate about. I'll continue to write for many years. Even when I don't have an audience. So, thank you to everyone who made me realize that. Writing is my art, my passion, and it's something I don't intend to stop any time soon.
This part is shorter than the others, because I had to add that little announcement. But next part will be longer, I promise.
If you don't remember who is who, watch the video. It's the intro.
Jaime stared at the girl in front of him.
"Who is it?" Diane called in from the other room.
"Uh, a girl," Jaime called back.
Aiden and Sam got up and walked over to Jaime.
He looked at his brothers. If they were anyone else, they would've ran to the door at the word "girl," but Diane raised them right. They had loving girlfriends. They were one-woman kind of guys.
Aiden studied the girl in front of them. Her hair was a mess, and her clothes were dirty. She had cuts on her arms, and Aiden figured that they were self-inflicted.
"Come in!" he said, once he realized that she was still standing outside.
The girl took a step inside, and nearly collapsed.
"Help me get her into the living room," Aiden told Sam.
Sam nodded, grabbed one of her arms, and helped her into the other room. He and Aiden set her down on the couch.
She closed her eyes as soon as her head hit the pillow.
"Did she tell you her name?" Sam wondered as the family convened in the kitchen.
Jaime shook his head. "No. I said, 'Can I help you?' And she said, 'I don't know, but I hope so.'" Jaime paused, remembering the look in her eyes. "She's scared."
"Of what?" Aiden asked.
"I don't know, but I know that I saw fear in her eyes."
"Who is she?" Diane said out loud. "And where did she come from?"
A little while later:
The girl opened her eyes slowly and backed away once she saw the boys looking at her.
"We aren't going to hurt you," Aiden said gently, putting his hand lightly on her arm.
She looked up at Aiden and knew just by looking in his eyes that what he said was true. They weren't going to hurt her. But could they help her?
"What's your name?" Jaime asked then.
The girl closed her eyes, trying to remember her name. She opened her eyes as tears came to her eyes. This was crazy, how could she not remember her own NAME?
"I-I don't know," she stammered, hurriedly wiping the tears away.
"You don't know your name?"
"Or where you're from?" Sam spoke up.
The girl shook her head. More tears came to her eyes.
"How is that possible?!" she cried. "How do I not know my own name?! How can I not remember where I'm from?" She put her head in her hands.
Aiden sat next to her, rubbing her back. "Don't worry," he told her soothingly. "We'll figure out who you are. Together." He smiled at her.
"I think you should be 'Kimberlee,'" Sam said then. His brothers looked at him. "What? She looks like a Kimberlee."
Jaime smacked Sam in the back of the head. "You're welcome to stay here for as long as you need"—He shot Sam a look—"Kimberlee."
Kimberlee smiled at the brothers. "Thank you," she said gratefully.
Maybe they CAN help her, after all.
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what is the song for the intro ? loved it :)
angel43232 2 years ago
i hope they do help her and i'm SO glad that you're gonna continue writing. (:
alikatie123 2 years ago
YAY! Glad you're continuing! Write for you and no one else!
I remember the Kimberlee thing from the trailer and it still makes me laugh. I can't wait till the drama and everything else comes up. I really wanna know what happened to her.
sj23564 2 years ago
i'm glad your going to stick with it! writing is something beautiful and no matter if the world sees its or not its a part of you that doesnt need explanation. keep writing girl! never give up!
soccershannon27 2 years ago
So amazing and I'm glad u didn't stop it:) yay soccershannon for knocking sense in u lol
LoveToLaughx0x3 2 years ago
That's more like it !
You rock(:
KelliexNguyen01 2 years ago
im really glad you're keeping this.
and i wish more writers had the same attitude as you.
all they care about is comments.
your writing is amazing! :)
Xilovejb00X 2 years ago
amazing!! weather it was short or not (: happy ur continuing this story! i luvv it! can't wait 4 the next one!
jonasbaseballracing 2 years ago
I'm glad u r contuining this (: & the boys r so sweet to let a complete stranger inside their house (: & yeah. u should write for u, I write a series too & i get like two or three comments on each ep, but I don't care I love writing it's wat i love to do & if u love to write then u should write for u not for the comments.
Jonasluver521 2 years ago
Poor kid not remembering anything,she is lucky that they are gentlemen but I guess deep down a memory she doesnt remember led her there
karleen3863 2 years ago