Moving On

Hey you guys! Here's just another song I managed to write, hope you guys like it! Reminds me a bit of Jason Mraz,but what do you guys think? I tried like a solo/singing thingy in there, I dunno if it's good or not though...constructive criticism is always welcome :)

Its a quarter past two A.M. and you arent back, Im questioning tha-at
Time you said that you loved me better right now take it all back cause
I know what youre doing, going out so late, youre making a big mistake
But hey, oh I cant stop you but you should know what you should do

I cant keep it any longer, so Im a let it all spill
All the things I hate about you, so let me fill you in-

Im tired of all your games I mean your stupid jokes, and you being lame
All the time, I mean me trying to rhyme for you, is that all that you want me to do?
And you leading me on -those days are gone- when you call me on the telephone you know I wont be home
Next time, try to get it right for the next guy- Hope you live strong, live long, but Im moving on
Im moving on

Now its a half past three, you still arent back so Im still worried
About you, you dont know what you do to me
You know Im so done with this, Im fed up with it and no first aid kit
Can help us- were spiraling out of control; we cant take any more
So why dont you and I take a little rest, and say good bye
Im done with you, youre done with me cause youre seeing another guy dont ask me why

I know, these things happen naturally, so Ill let it be
Im letting you go, but its kind of hard so Im letting you know that

Im tired of all your games I mean your stupid jokes, and you being lame
All the time, I mean me trying to rhyme for you, is that all that you want me to do?
And you leading me on -those days are gone- when you call me on the telephone you know I wont be home
Next time, try to get it right for the next guy- Hope you live strong, live long, but Im moving on

This doesnt mean were getting any closer
Only means that you and I are over cause

Im tired of all your games I mean your stupid jokes, and you being lame
All the time, I mean me trying to rhyme for you, is that all that you want me to do?
And you leading me on -those days are gone- when you call me on the telephone you know I wont be home
Next time, try to get it right for the next guy- Hope you live strong, live long, but Im moving on

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• swimmerdude945
• Moving On
• Jason Mrazish

[eagleeyez128]

very good, but I can barely hear you...need a better mic

[yourstrulykaren]

wow eric :) mad respect for youu

[mamoyzkie]

i love the rhythm of the song...=)

keep it up dude!^_^

[Pillsburyjoytoy]

You're so great! :D

[theguineapig26]

a) LOVE the piano part. b) good lyrics once again, like these better than your other song. :p c) i agree with the other person, you soudn a lto different on camcorder. but good job another good vid! :p told you i'd look it up-but you also get a comment! :p

[DEEPANGIE]

That was an AWESOME song... I like the lyrics... keep it up!:)

[atillazehun]

You sound so different on a camcorder... The chorus is brilliant. At other times, it feels like you should match your lyrics to the beat a little better. I think you have an extra one sometimes. Mad props though. You sound way sexier over the internet. Add that to your silky smooth calves and your the perfect guy for me :)

[Petaro]

YES!