Someone's Watching Over Me [Chapter 13]

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Uploaded by on Apr 18, 2010

Hey guys, sorry I was busy.
I was gone during Spring break,
so I wrote this while I was there.
Its been a while. Hope you like
it.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Heather's POV

Today the boys had off. What does that mean?
WEll it means that they're each going to
do something seperate with their girlfriends.
This makes it even tougher to keep an eye
on them.

I'd have to go to the heavens to watch over
all of them easily, but I wouldn't want to
leave Joe alone.

Maybe he can do something with Franie? That
way I can watch everyone in full view.

Nick and Kevin were already gone with their
girlfriends, so I need to get moving on this.



I spotted Joe in the loungue, I knocked
on the wall to catch his attention.
His gorgeous eyes looked up at me.

"Hey Joe. What are your plans for
the day?" I asked, as I leaned against
the wall.

"Well, I'm supposed to be doing
something with Frankie. Want to join?"

This works in my favor just right.
Aw, he is so sweet to include me,
sadly I've got a duty to attend to.

"I'd love to Joe, but I have
something to do. Reincheck?"

"Oh, alright. Yeah, I'd like that."
He said with sad yet cheerful eyes.



He doesn't know how bad this is killing
me. If only he knew what I do, then
maybe just maybe things could work
easily.


I'll have to speak with the elders.
Maybe we'll come up with some kind of
compromise or subtle hints.

A few minutes, Frankie came in to get
Joe, and off they went. Now, off I
go.


I gasped as I appeared in the heavens.
Orbing, look it but I'm still not
fully used to it.

The heavens were awfully cloudy today.
I made my way to the viewing circle,
and cleared away the fog.

I brought up each group into view,
to make it easy to watch everyone.
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Sorry once again. Hope you enjoyed it.
It may suck, but I was tired when I wrote it.
Comment, sub, rate, whatever.

-Amber

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  • its been 3 months please write and post i subbed do not let me down and can i be in ur next video and story in Someone's watching over me

    if i cant thats fine but i would like to be thank you ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ Cheyenne ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

  • @CheyenneGarris on this story? omg! that's long. I'll write and post asap. ill see what I can do you might have to play a bad person or something

  • It didn't suck.

    But I'm not gonna argue.

    I'm just glad you posted something.

    :D

  • @ASHLYR60 haha bcuz yu kno it did ;]

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  • i love this story!

    its soo different from all the other stories.

    please post more soon!(:

  • HEY hehe my name is Heather....i wish i was nick's love interest :) i would be the happiest girl in the world :)

  • amazing chapter

  • @MrsJonasCraved Psh, who told you that?

    Lol. No it was good but I agree with xXxKrystalLynxXx,

    Not your best.

  • it wasn't your bessst, but at least you wrote something

    i stilll liked it!! post sooon againn, or should i say

    write soon again!. ;p

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