Song in progress

Rough ass demo into my iphone at 4am, of a song I started writing for my daughter.
I'll take this down real soon, I just wanted to show someone in the US of A.

Lyrics;

I'm of the mind that a man is but a creature, flawed by nature,
dumb by design,
I don't exclude myself lord from this picture,
I know I'm the worst of my kind.
This rule of thumb came from careful observation of the world,
and nothing ever changed my mind....
....until you.

Oh, it's simple,
Yeah but it's true,
Nothing I can ever do will ever make me smile like you.

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[madwhinney]

Superb little ditty on a lovely sounding guitar. What are you playing.?

[cejblade]

Brilliant ;)

[TheKillyjoy]

That's a fabulous song, Rick! No one ever believes until they have a child of their own.

[Stratix7]

WOW ! That's fantastic! Did not expect that voice to come from you, excellent voice and guitar playing!

[uncaskillet]

This is nice Rick. A liitle different & sweet for your Abbi...Now Zac & Abbi have their own songs! Will it be on the next cd? Lookin' forward to it bro...Well done as always bro.

eric

[TomRAFC]

really like it mate and would love to hear a finished product. CoffeeGuitar-AGF

[SamuellaMusic]

Nice songwriting man, keep it up! Hope you dont have any angry neighbours! :D

[couchking1]

Really reminds me of Andy McKee haha...awesome song, awesome chords. This should totally be played by guitarists worldwide.

[xCarlinee]

Please upload the song when you´ve finished it. It´s great. :)

[vodkaa1]

Good stuff, Rick!