Original song by my friend

Hey guys! I KNOW this isn't me singing, & I promise I will have one soon, but I haven't had much time yet to get one done.
BUT I would LOVE for you to check out my really good friend, Jeremy. This is an original song he wrote & got all this down in one day.
I want to show him that other people like his song, too, other than me, so LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK :) Spread it around :)
Thanks!

Lyrics::
Bite your lip girl but don't hide your face
As tears stream down your pillow, your pillowcase
Hold me close as if I might stray...
When we wake up will it all be the same?

Losing hope like falling leaves from the trees
Our hearts once moved like the summer, like the summer breeze
I have one thought with you in mind
When we wake up will you still be mine?

I wanted to show you how
This thing called love can turn your world around
I look to you it seems there's nothing that can come between us

You left your mark on my neck last night
Did you mean it or is it just a bite?
I'd like to tell you everything's gonna be alright
When we wake up, I don't want to wake up tonight

I wanted to show you how
This thing called love can turn your world around
I look to you it seems there's nothing that can come between us
...Take my hand girl let's not look back
Who ever fooled us into taking this track?
I'm sorry things had to get so hard
All I know is I love you, and that's a start

Category:

Music

Tags:

• jeremy
• original
• song
• singing
• guitar

[TiffyTindellMusic]

sounds good! I wish i could play guitar!

[hawk130lb]

Sounds great dude! Keep up the amazing work!

[LVJ2310]

really great :) keep it up!

[MrsAndySamberg]

I like this!! :) sent here by Alex House :P good job!

[AvastPirateGirl]

I Like this you have such talent i agree keep up the good work!!!!!! (:

[NCMWilliams]

That is a great song Jeremy! It sounded awesome and I really enjoyed listening to it!

[fiveohfirst2132]

keep up the good work!

[JostFaceKilla]

Awesome song Jeremy! Keep it up, looking forward to more

[vbaron21]

sick song broski! you really got a taste for writing lyrics. i could turn this into one hell of a pop punk song! haha keep it up man!

[airpapa93]

that was good!