Apple Motion 4 Digital 3D film

I'd very much like it if you could comment on this video saying if you like it or not, doesn't have to be really detailed, but any sort of good response would be good for me to use as part of my evaluation.

These are some of the intros I did for a Y12 end of year summer show that I did pretty much all on my own, these graphics are made in motion and played in HD on a projector.

Thanks

Software used: motion iMovie final cut pro apple series and garage band. 1080i encoding.

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• summer
• awards
• show
• final
• cut
• pro
• apple
• FCP
• imovie
• garage
• band

[2608FILMS]

Cool 

[Sullivan878]

good

[crcpnoy2k]

not bad but it looks like you rely quite a bit on livetype for your typography. most of the scene look like it's just a livetype preset on stock footage. try using some of the text behaviors in motion 4 to help you break out of the mold a bit.

[ryomali]

Hey dude,

I do like the video, though I don't understand what it's entirely about (may help to clarify). The atmosphere the audio created fit very well to the motion graphics. Very nice designing, though some of them (the speedo one) was very hard to read. The only thing I can criticise about this video is that your vector motion using the brush was bad. (The effect where the text writes itself) I would go over the brush stokes again.

Now you watch my videos and comment and rate plz!