I DONT MEAN TO AFFEND IN ANNY OF THESE LYRICS THEY ARE JUST WHAT MY UNKEL WROTE..... but pls tell me what i have to improve on..... i wont be hurt. thanks love u all
the breath of life has left me now
escaping from my grasp somehow
every time i close my eyes a death rattel deos arise
in the corner of my eyes i see
shadow leafing up at me
if i could get some sleep tonight
everything would be all right
ive lost the scense of who i am
an i cant get that back again
cant find joy in what i do
an now it seems ive lost u too
i will not prepare the jurney
i will not be coming home
i can hear the trumpets callin
when i go ill go alon
some eyes look up to the sky
in hopes heaven when they die but
i wont gamble with the odds
that my fate lies with some god
the reward i hope to reap
peacfull everlasting sleep
ive lost the sence of who i am
cant get that back again
cant find joy in what i do
now it seems ive lost u too
This moved me. My dad would be proud. ~Matt
Punkninja12 1 year ago
:) bet you don't know who this is Janey. :) anyway i think its awsome that you sing songs the ur Uncle wrote. Luv you and ttyl
wegnerk77 2 years ago