MJ Fantasy: " The Man Next Door" Part 25
Uploader Comments (OldSchoolSweetheart)
All Comments (46)
-
my favorite line: "I can't believe this fool just put his hands on me." that is so funny!!!! lol i love it!
-
Omg, this was realy intense!!
-
sorry i havent commented for a while i was catching up with the story and i was REALLY busy with homework but you are so AWESOME!!! i just know someone is going to discover your stories and make you famous!
-
OOH that fight was epic!!! Awwww that moment between Michael and Ana in the parking lot was great. Yes it is going to take some time and yes Michael did make a lot of mistakes but the genuine love between the two of them is still strong. Its beautiful!!!
-
when is abused heart coming out?
-
I forget to comment on many occasions "slap my hands" but I love your story (s) so keep them coming.
-
@OldSchoolSweetheart O.O
-
I just already know Ana is going to say "I love you Michael" OMG I cant wait for the next part!!!! *screams for next part*
What the hell appened to "THE NEXT PART WILL BE UP MONDAY!"
BULLSHIT!
xD! lmao... (Don't mind me, i'm just extremely frantic.)
HURRY IT UP!
DaizyfreeAG 3 months ago
@DaizyfreeAG ahahaha I know!! I'm sorry =( I started work yesterday, and it's from 10am to 7pm. By the time I get home, I am so tired cause I still have a child to care for afterwards. I am gonna work on it tonight. I am almost done. Maybe tomorrow but no promises =p
OldSchoolSweetheart 3 months ago