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Uploaded by on Nov 24, 2009

Nick's P.O.V.

Red and blue flashing lights. Screaming and crying. Devastation and pain.

Warm tears were flowing down my face as I looked at the sight in front of me. An over turned, black SUV, dented and crumbled in the middle of a busy intersection of downtown Los Angeles. Two white sheets covering two bodies.

I looked down at the scapes that covered my body, blood trailing from each. My left leg was shattered, according to the workers aroiund me, and I could barely breathe. A paramedic was putting pressure on one gash as they loaded me into the back of the ambulance.

I felt woozy, and my eyes were slipping closed.

"Nick, Nick, please stay with us! Please!" It was the strangled cry of my older brother, Joe. His hand grasped my right, and his tears fell onto the skin of my arm. "Don't leave us."

"Nick, please stay! We can't lose you too!" That was Kevin. He sounded devasted.

We had every right to be. On our way home from a concert, a drunk driver in a semi ran a red light. We flipped three times. It all happened faster than I thought possible...

FLASHBACK:

"That's was sooo much fun!" Joe exclaimed. I smiled at my enthusiastic, crazy older brother.

"It was boys, you were amazing to-" My mom started, but didn't finish.

At that moment, two long headlights appeared through the window. It was dead silent for a second, as we stared wide eyed and terrified at the vehicle charging toward us. Dad tried to get away, but it was too late...

CRASH!

Crunching metal, shattering glass, screams of pain, blaring horns, then silence. Pain erupted all over me, and tears filled my eyes.

"Mom?" Joe's voice cut the chaos. "Dad? MOMMY!"

I squinted my eyes, and a terrifying sight was there. My mother, thrown from the car, lying motionless in the middle of the road not ten feet away.She was gone, it was obvious. I wasn't able to react before I heard a strangled moan from my father.

He was near my mom, bleeding profusely.He was about to go too.

"Daddy, please don't leave us! Please," I screamed.

His last words shocked us, but we promised ourselves to honor them.

"You have a sister," he said as strongly as he could. "Get her out of the foster home, and take care of her...I love you."

With that, he was gone.

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What do you think. If I do this, I'm not gonna stop my other. This idea just hit me. Comment and tell me what you think!

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Uploader Comments (MemphisGal94)

  • Whats the next one??????

  • @TheSelenatorG The next chapter? I'm pretty sure it's Sister Story Chp. 2. And then it changes to Together, a Family.

  • I like it, but I think the other 1 is better.

    Why cant you do both???

  • At the bottom, it says I'm not going to stop the other. I can do both, I just want feedback.

    If I don't get alot, I'm not going to do it

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  • super good can't wait for more

  • Where is the next one? '_'

    

  • i cant find the next one -__-

  • loved it.. amazing

  • amazing

  • OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I LOVED THAT!!!!!!

  • great ep

  • it wasss awesome but dont quit the other one!

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