I both agree and disagree with the judges. I think that the charisma of your character comes from his own desire to get revenge. I do however agree that the story may work a lot better as a series or really cool movie. I love the potential showdown between the main character and the boss tho. :) Keep going man.
I love the concept! Yeah, you may not want to be this guy, but I think that the mystery of the character and his medical problems blending with sicence fiction is an attention grabber. I think the character is his own book and deserves it.
I both agree and disagree with the judges. I think that the charisma of your character comes from his own desire to get revenge. I do however agree that the story may work a lot better as a series or really cool movie. I love the potential showdown between the main character and the boss tho. :) Keep going man.
Holiwood 4 years ago
Make this into a manga as opposed to a comic and this has a chance of becoming a hit.
Hshin 4 years ago
I love the concept! Yeah, you may not want to be this guy, but I think that the mystery of the character and his medical problems blending with sicence fiction is an attention grabber. I think the character is his own book and deserves it.
VendettaMan 4 years ago