My 1st Music Video attempt #3

Here's my own analysis of this video:
Video #3. I don't like that extra sound at 00:09 and how I stepped away; I like how the body kinda floated across the screen like a ghost from 00:15 - 00:20 and how the head cocked to one side at the end just before she exits plus the walking speed was just right; the speed and movement from 00:37 - 00:49 was about right but at first I didn't like how the body was too right of frame to see her movements clearly near the end since I couldn't see where the camera was and hadn't mastered the center location yet but later I liked the fact I couldn't see what she was doing then just before she exits I like her arm and head movement EXACTLY the way she did it at 00:48; I think it looks too much like a dance from 00:55 - 01:00 which I didn't want a dance would look too cheesy for this video; I learned to keep my eyelids near shut at 01:23 cuz the pupils look scary in this camera HAHA; the move-in movement at 01:32 was how I wanted it to look with the illusion of the camera zooming in, not like the ones in video 2021; also the move-out movement at 01:47 was perfect too almost like the body was sliding out (thank god for wooden floors) including how the body contorts downwards at the end of the move-out movement; the chest/hip movements from 01:59 - 02:24 is a tad bit too sexy and that's what I wanted to stay away from; I like how it looks like she's thinking or fustrated at 02:30 - 02:50; I like the arms and how the head is down like that at around 03:23 cuz it tells a story of hitting rock bottom and the desparation that comes after it like she can't take it anymore but I hate how she backs out like that at 03:27 cuz it looks cheesy; then at 3:30 - 03:33 she lifts her head from gloomy days and brushes her hair back to look forward to a brighter day (I totally didn't plan this story, it just happened to look like this story after I viewed it HA); I absolutely love the movement from 03:51 - 03:57 cuz it was in perfect synch with the decrescendo of the song's voice as the body/arms descended along with it in this video where as it wasn't in such perfect synch with the music in the other videos; I like the length of the emptiness from 03:58 - 04:05; I think the drunkin quirky movements from 04:06 - 04:20 matched perfectly with the beats at the end of the music but the exit was too abrupt; however I like the empty room being the last shot.
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Category:

Music

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• music
• video
• asian
• female
• girl
• hair
• art
• experimental
• short
• black
• and
• white
• dance
• night
• artisitic
• sorrow
• sad
• dark

[wingsiu]

good movement, good zoom and good mood.

who was doing that analysis anyway?

[2JADE]

I did the analysis. :)

[madison333mdkd333]

I thought this was great

[jpalex224]

I really like, how the quality of the camera isn't to good because it actually adds to the effect, you should edit this video so you can do more than just walk around, for this song it's very cool, but for future reference, also add the song in on editing, no have it playing in the backround. what I would do was have it slowly fade from in backround to editied in.

[benadam1]

ITS NOT SCARRY!!

[blinktwice]

The song is beautiful.. Nice Vid. :]

[Russia3795]

I like when you were pulled out of teh picture

[Courty61023]

I love the story u seemed to get out of this! Great job make more!