You play it with a good technique, but it seems to be in too much robbed style. What I think is you can play it better, if the robbed style can be reduced a bit and make the music moving, and have a good flow in the music. However you have good musical playing and a good touch. Keep it up!
You obviously love this piece and enjoy playing it, and you are technically very good, but I think I have to agree with some other comments that you play it rather mechanically, almost as if using a metronome. Another thing is that the piece is supposed to sound mysterious and exotic - so you need a lighter touch generally. Also, you move around far too much ! But thank you for sharing this lovely piece.
Great technicality, you played very evenly, but too robotic for my liking. Try mixing things up a bit, and vary the tone from piano to forte to build a climax in the second page. This song can be altered to a more sensitive and changing tone and feeling. Well played though.
some of your rolls were too loose to me, but I still liked the overall feel. Also make sure you're connecting your pedals all the way because sometimes it breaks off all of a sudden and it sounds a little strange.
aThis is the first time for to listen to this piece yet your play impressed me deeply , I hope to get to know much about such music .well played , this is my impression
You play it with a good technique, but it seems to be in too much robbed style. What I think is you can play it better, if the robbed style can be reduced a bit and make the music moving, and have a good flow in the music. However you have good musical playing and a good touch. Keep it up!
sachiththaf 1 year ago
it was pretty good ^^ your glissandi and the semiquavers before it were really clear and well done ^^
but it sounded a bit mechanical and too rhythematic (i'm playing this myself at the moment too)
just my opinion tho~
ihearteunteuk 1 year ago
You obviously love this piece and enjoy playing it, and you are technically very good, but I think I have to agree with some other comments that you play it rather mechanically, almost as if using a metronome. Another thing is that the piece is supposed to sound mysterious and exotic - so you need a lighter touch generally. Also, you move around far too much ! But thank you for sharing this lovely piece.
julietta1976 1 year ago
lol you look like you are in your early 20s
Japanzor 1 year ago
it does sound like Satie...beautiful!
your playing is excellent. i like the weird 'robotic' quality it makes the piece even more hauntingly beautiful.
Its a sweet and funny piece..i first heard it as a teen and i loved it. Like a sad and twisted Liberace.
dougkolk1 2 years ago
Great technicality, you played very evenly, but too robotic for my liking. Try mixing things up a bit, and vary the tone from piano to forte to build a climax in the second page. This song can be altered to a more sensitive and changing tone and feeling. Well played though.
jtay001 2 years ago
some of your rolls were too loose to me, but I still liked the overall feel. Also make sure you're connecting your pedals all the way because sometimes it breaks off all of a sudden and it sounds a little strange.
zestyqueen 2 years ago
Amazingg
DemiLFanClub 2 years ago
aThis is the first time for to listen to this piece yet your play impressed me deeply , I hope to get to know much about such music .well played , this is my impression
liwuzong 2 years ago
It does sound like a piece by Satie and I must confess that I'm not very fond of Satie's music.
Never the less, your performance was so brilliant that it progressively grew on me.
klingsor93 2 years ago