Underdog: A Jonas Brothers Life Story~Chapter 1

This is the first chapter of my first youtube story. I will be posting the next chapter right away. This chapter is kind of the intro but i will call it chapter one! I hope you enjoy and please i would love feedback. I can take Constructive Critisim but please dont be mean about it! Thank You
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I had been living in the same house my whole life and I loved it! It was fun because my entire neighbor hood seemed like one huge family. My family was a little closer to the family that lived to the right of us. They were the Jonas family. For most of the time that I knew them it was just the mom, Denise, the dad, Paul, and their three sons. Paul and Denise had lived in the same house since they had gotten married which was about the same time that my mom and dad moved in, which is why I think they became so close. Paul and Denise had Kevin a few months before my mom and dad had my sister Danielle. Growing up Kevin and Danni were always extremely close, practically inseparable. The next addition came to my family. It was my twin sisters Mandy and Molly. They were just two weeks older then Joe Jonas. I remember when we were little Joe was extra hyperactive and would sit in between Mandy and Molly and pull ones hair, act like he didnt, and get them to be mad at each other. Somehow they would always find out it was Joe then they would start chasing him. He would always out run them with his quick moves. A few years after Joe and the twins were born, my mom and Denise got pregnant at the same time. Then towards the very end of summer, in the middle of September, I, Allison Bradley, was born. My mother was leaving the hospital the day that Denise went into labor. Just three days after me Nick was born. All of us were the best of friends. Of course we all had our moments of being bratty but what little kid doesnt, right? Growing up I knew that I was the ugly duckling of the family. I was the only one that didnt get my moms beautiful blue eyes instead I wound up with my dads green eyes. My sisters always had the smooth gorgeous locks of blonde hair anyone would be jealous of. And as for me, well I got stuck with this untamable birds nest of copper brown hair. And the worst part was that I was always on the pudgy side. No one ever said it to my face but I knew it. My sisters got the perfect vision while I needed glass when I was only three years old! Even with my baby teeth they were spacey and all you could see was gums! I was not a very pretty site but I got use to it.

When I started school I didnt have many friends and I tried to make friends but no one really wanted to talk to me. So at recess I was all alone when I saw Nick playing with a huge group of kids and he saw me and came over to me. The kids seemed really shocked that he was talking to me. I looked at him and he asked me to play with him and his friends. Thats when I knew that Nick and I had a friendship, not just being neighbors and stuff but real friends. Even as we got a little older he was always invited to hang out and I wasnt but he would ask me to go with him and if the other kids didnt want me there Nick would tell them that he wouldnt come either. Soon people just started accepting me which I really liked.

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[iluvnickjonas0000000]

ur lucky u get comments. i wrote a series and i have not got one comment any any one exept 4 one by onsinglerose09 and me on the intro.

good job..

[lauren5913]

Sorry u don't get comments if it's new just be patient we all don't start right off with comments

[julymartiinez]

i'm a fan :D i love this story :D

[lauren5913]

Thanks so much

[Jobroluvr22]

omg this is soo good already!

[lauren5913]

omj thanks!

[TheTwilightTwins232]

OMJ!!! I love it!!! I love how you dont start out all fast but let us get to know the charaters. :D Good job!!!

Yajaira

[knd0301]

i love the jonas brothers!!!dont you?!!!

[nickjprincess66]

great story

[Music4Ever09ve]

I loove it ! <33 :)

Its really really good !