first demo version....with slideshow....all music is one take, invented on the spot.
A la lou reed
Sitting at home, Im drinking coffee
Bumming around, trying to get this feeling off me
And I dont if Im going to get it right, right now.
A la david bowie
And standing here dreaming of a world
In the things that you almost never said
And I wanted it to be something better than this
But you, high strung in your ways
And I wont take it no more and I dont know what more I can say
Verse II
Sitting at home I been drinking coffee
Waiting for you, waiting for you to call me
But you never call and I dont know how Im supposed to feel
Dreaming about things that Id done
And theyre all done wrong
And I never knew
Im waiting for you
Sometimes it just goes like that
And I think to myself is it ever going to be what it was
And were drifting past the dreams and the dreams that died
and I wonder what your feeling right now deep inside
instrumental break
Verse III
sitting at home, Ive been drinking coffee
wondering where you are, but you got off me
weaned yourself from this addiction
sitting right here what more can I say
and I drift away and Im not coming back no more
sitting right here waiting for you
but you never come home x3
and I cant take it no more
and Im fighting through this thing
one more time hoping youll see me
Cool stuff, great singing !
crnirok1 2 years ago
Hey thank you. I´m glad you took your time to have a look and liked it enough to leave a comment....not a very conventional songwriting style, but it´s the way it wanted to come out. thanks again...jet
jelemann 2 years ago
thats cool!...invented on the spot...nice
stealurface1976 2 years ago
hello my friend from brantford....how are things? thanks for having a look at the posts and taking your time to comment....much appreciated.....later
jelemann 2 years ago