Two Exquisite Corpses
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Your poem is touching. Your heart is free and open. More so than most people without your challenges.
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Wow, I liked it even better the second time I played it. I would like to think this was not written from personal experience. It sucks to cut someone you loved out of your life, even to be the bad guy they need you to be to make that happen.
There's no doubt you're a talented wordsmith.
I wasn't looking for this sort of thing today, but this vid gave me pause.
Kudos Bro, keep it up.
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thats really good! it sounds really nice!
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Very good man.
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Well done!
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I have one.
Three exquisite phantoms,
One is, not new,
Two is, not my world,
Three is, Not my order.
Neither is it yours.
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make poems about the New World Order...
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man, you've got talent! keep it up!
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I don't see the phrase "exquisite corpse" come up much....are you a reader of Poppy Brite?
blackesteyes13 2 years ago
I am not, but I would like to know more about this material "Poppy Brite", feel free to email me about it and any unique material on poetry.
JonahTorn 1 year ago
Well done man. The poem comes to life. My hat is off to you.
ejgiv 3 years ago
Do you know any one who might benefit from these words? I can take comments on expanding on peace topics and try to write what people need to hear. Kind words can heal
and uplift, but I always want more ideas for my art.
JonahTorn 3 years ago
Very good
jpage78 3 years ago
Thank you. Every one should check out the
vidoe on your channel:
Paul McCartney - Back on my Feet
Paul McCartney is awesome!
JonahTorn 3 years ago