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Uploader Comments (WordsWithoutBounds)
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You are amazing! A True poet, that was raw emotion. Well done!
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Total ownage! And it sounds like he deserved it, too. Guys like that make me ashamed that I am a man. I hope you also kicked him out of your house butt-naked and still dribbling.
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Rargh! Bash that phallocentrism!
1.13 laugh out loud haha
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OK - so you' re a dike? who cares?
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You're a 21st century Catullus.
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women using sex as a weapon. now there's a surprise.
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He may have fuck'd you, but you fucked back brilliantly.
You left that bad experience on paper and shoved it back at his ego....well done...next!
I love ballsy women who straight up no bullshit, who are take it or leave it.
I wish well, good health, and much happiness.
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An eye for an eye only works if the other person has an eye. If not, hack off something else. As a male, I can attest to the degree of justice you have attained, It's a shame some men are too blind to truly understand that. To be fair, there are a few women out there that could use some thicker lenses.
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Victim status oozing out here.
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I've heard a lot about how it's best to tell people how you feel, being blunt and honest is the virtue of courage, etc., but sometimes it's best to pretend. Tolerating other people while pretending to like them is easier than pointing out each thing that bothers us, and won't lead to unnecessary hurt feelings. Besides, the people I tolerate might tolerate me, and really think something that would offend me if they said it.
Do you wonder how the man's poem would sound?
Great stuff.. faved and five stars...
DavidRandallCurtis 2 years ago
Wow thanks, I feel genuinely honoured having reviewed your vids. Definitely subbed.
WordsWithoutBounds 2 years ago
There was a part I didnt like. When you described the act itself of penetration with a condom. You made it sound really heinous and abusive, but I mean all that happened in that part of the poem is that he wore a latex condom and penetrated.
Any guy would have had to of done the same thing at that point, so I did'nt get that part.
Ayatron34 2 years ago
I suppose the difference is that when I write poetry I speak in a poetic voice, one which has very distinct feelings and motivations. So you shouldn't see it so much as me giving some kind of manifesto as an author of my views on penetrative sex with men, so much as the poetic voice's feelings about a particular partly fictional exploit. I do FEEL some of these things, it just means that on this channel I don't claim to make rational logical arguments, just representations of irrationality.
WordsWithoutBounds 2 years ago