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Uploaded by on Nov 9, 2007

(Project Direct short film submission)

When the three "responsible" members of a family fall out, who's left to keep it together?


Total budget - £0.78 (Spent on two pints of milk.)

Starring Stevie and James Finegan
Written, Directed and Edited by Erin Hopkins (Kewen)

Music used is royalty-free


I really loved making this, and I think it turned out alright for a debut short film attempt. If I could go back and change the ending I would, but alas, this will be submitted in the nick of time as it is.
Good luck to the rest of the entrants!

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  • ill be 100% critical

    the acting could have been more believable.

    the production quality seemed to low compared to what it could have been (especially the room noise: that series of jump cuts was certainly a great idea but was interrupted by the sound)

    the camera work was too close giving the movie a claustrophobic feel which i would guess may or may not have been the intention but i personally didnt think it fit

    otherwise a great short film, something you should be proud of!

  • Really appreciate your comment :D

    I think the genuine reason I had to film so close was because of the mic on the camera, I doubt it would have picked up much sound otherwise. And it was filmed in a small house. But you're right, and if I was going to re-make it I would do lots of things differently, and reducing the cramped-looking shots is one of them.

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  • aww soo sweet. *hugs*

  • wow, great filming! very inspiring for an aspiring film maker as my self.

  • lol interesting... "lets make biscuts, yea?" "YEA!!!!!!"

  • needs more ukulele

  • i realize that i have the same cleaning maschine... dont know what is the english word for because iam from german. But the thing i talk about is the red-black maschine with eyes on it. I have the same ^^

  • I like it!

    To me though, you'll always be known as my sister who made Fishmaster. XD

  • I liked it. ^^

  • i liked it! good work. :)

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