The FanFiction Critic, episode 46, "The Human Centipede Love at First Bite"
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Uploaded by AFanFictionCritic on Aug 18, 2011
The fanfiction in today's episode belongs entirely to the author. It can be read in its entirety here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6256543/1/The_Human_Centipede_Love_at_first_bite. Suggest bad fanfiction: thefanfictioncritic@gmail.com
WARNING: This story is really, really gross. Just putting that out there.
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THUMBS UP FOR BEATLES T-SHIRT!!
Thanks to this, I got the Rocky Horror Picture Show running through my head.
Toucha toucha touch me! I wanna be dirty!
Chill me, thrill me, fulfill me
CREATURE OF THE NIGHT!
Yeah, Ruby makes Janet look like...well...a virgin
6 months ago 15
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Things that can only happen in bad fan fiction #82: Bratwurst avec strawberry-flavored semen.
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*FACEPALM.*
It's FanFiction like these that make me ashamed and hesitant to say I write FanFiction. Some people only read this shit and think they're all the same when that isn't true. B|
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@Grandpharaoh91 No,it isn't.Hell, I was actually thinking the same thing! This author is seriously disturbed, even moreso then that chick who "Back To The Frollo".*shudder*
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This is one of the WORST fan fiction you have reviewed I hate the author... Didn't the Japanese guy have kids/a kid?
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(CONT.)
I doubt you care about any of that, becuase I bet you just wrote these to masturbate to. You then thought "Hey, why don't I post my masturbation fodder online to inflate my ego?" Congrats, you're just like Stephanie Meyer.
I also love how you think you can get away with writing such dribil without being repramanded. When you beg for people to stop flaming your story, you sound like a bratty child. -End-
Did that sound too mean?
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Here's my review to this piece of crap:
Bitch, you're crazy. And not in the good way. Your character is obviously a Mary Sue that's is fufiling your own fucked up sexual fantasies. Doctor Heiter is a psychopath who only cares about his experiments, and will use anyone or anything to acheive his goals. He is NOT some sick puppy that just needs love. (TBC.)
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Seriously, say "dont flame plz" just seems like troll bait to me.
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@AFanFictionCritic No, normal teenagers today still say "home run," but I suppose this author is just an ignoramus with all aspects.
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4th base is something teenagers say.
1st base: Kissing
2nd: Feeling
3rd: Oral Sex
4th: Actual sex.
So, I suppose this author is a teenager.
triplequeen 6 months ago 8
@triplequeen
When I was a teenager (God, I feel old), a "home run" was actual sex (you know, in keeping with the baseball metaphor). Kids these days...
AFanFictionCritic 6 months ago 16
I don't know if someone has already commented about this but "taking the piss" is an expression meaning to mock someone. It's not a very commonly used phrase but still used. Basically, what the author was saying is that Katsudo was mocking them by interrupting them.
And if you already knew that and you were just being sarcastic, I'm sorry. My ability to detect sarcasm can be off sometime. >___>
BlackKirara 6 months ago 3
@BlackKirara
Not at all! I had no idea what "taking the piss" means. But now that I do know, I'll be using it a lot more. :)
AFanFictionCritic 6 months ago 4