Why Dont you kiss her? (a KJLS) chp 5 pt 2
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Uploaded by MsKevinK2J0nas on Aug 1, 2008
*****Story Here*****
Part 2
so we got 4 comments. keep promoting this guys please? the more comments and subscriptions the more ill post a day. i like posting 2-3 a day but ill only do that if you give more comments. so like last time im asking for 5 comments for chapter 6 =] btw......your going to want chp 6 i promise.
JOE: i think we deserve to try....
RACHEL: *starts crying* i love you too joseph....but i cant do it....im sorry *then she hugs joe tightly looks at him sadly and runs home*
Everyday that week joe would go to her house and call her wayy to many times to count but she avoided him. so by the end of the week the Jonas family packed up and left to california, once they arrived Joe called Rachel again and gave her his new address hoping she would call or write, they never saw eachother again till the day before.
RACHEL: joe.....i want to apologize...for the way i reacted all that time ago *he opens his mouth to speak but she politely asks him to let her finish, she held it in so long she knew it was time he got an explanation* i never wanted to hurt you, i was so afraid that if we got together and you left i'd lose you to some hot hollywood girl, but what i didnt realize was that ilost you anyways...it was all my flut i should have answered your calls or tried to listen to you, and you were right, we deserved a shot, we still do.
Joe didnt say a word, instead he grabbed one of rachels hands and with his free hand placed it under her chin tilted her head slightly and brought his lips to hers, he kissed her with every bit of emotion in his body, he finally pulled away and he was breathless he smiled at her and she smiled back, he could see the tears forming in her eyes and pulled her into a hug. after thatall of Rachel's doubts and fears faded, she wanted this, no she needed this, they both did.
JOE: Rachel?
RACHEL: yes joe? *wipes her tears away*
JOE: please be mine ?(AN* sorry i had to haha)
RACHEL: *smiles at him* i will.
*Monica slept warm and safe with kevin holding her for over an hour, he never got tired of the slow steady rise and fall of her chest as she breathed, she soon awoke to the gentle soothing feel of kevin slowing rubbing her back, he felt her move and kissed her forehead, all of a sudden emotion feeled her entire being and she felt years of secret feeling and love for kevin overwhelm her, it brought tears to hger eyes when she realized this was where she needed to be, the only time and place she ever felt whole and complete was when she was in his arms, kevin felt his shirt become damp and became worried
KEVIN: hey....whats the matter sweetie? why are you crying?
MONICA: *slowly she sat up , probing kevin to do the ame, he reached over and wiped her tears away* kevin, i think im in love with you.......
OMG I CANT BELIEVE I JUST DID THAT!!!! I HAD A WHOLE OTHER ENDING BUT I NEEDED TO GET THAT OUT HAHA IT WAS TIME! SO OMG RACHEL AND JOE ARE A COUPLE!!!!! WHATS KEVIN GOING TO DO WHEN HE REALIZES MONICA IS IN LOVE WITH HIM????
CHAPTER 6 UP LATER IF I GET 5 COMMENTS =]
song- Heels Over Head By BoysLikeGirls my other fave boys haha
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niceeeeeeeee
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JOE: please be mine ?
CORNY!!! but JoBromantic!!!
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haha thanks!
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wow kevin adn her better be married lmfao
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Once again, awesome stories!!!!
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This is soooooooooooo awesome, i so subcribed to you. You're pretty talented btw. More Nick PLEASE
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awesome again as always and love the song
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OMG!!
MONICA: *slowly she sat up , probing kevin to do the ame, he reached over and wiped her tears away* kevin, i think im in love with you.......
that was AWESOME!
and yay!
me and joe are a couple! :P
lolz xD
JonasBrothersRockz23 3 years ago
haha omg i cant believe it myself!!!
i wasnt even going to write me and kevin into this part it was gnna be al lyou and joe but i had to do it lol it was sitting at the corner of my head... haha
next chapter up in a half hour or so =]
MsKevinK2J0nas 3 years ago
post the other 1 soon!! i wanna c wat kevin says. omj im in love w/ ur stories plz post another 1 soon
sheilakevinj 3 years ago
ha thank you!
4 more comments and i will i promise =]
MsKevinK2J0nas 3 years ago