Katie reads 50 Shades Freed, Part 1

We're nearing the end of what has almost become a little series. I feel weird asking you to like, comment and subscribe if you enjoyed this video (because I get annoyed at people who constantly do that), but you know, please do if you feel like it. It's wonderful motivation to keep working on it.

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[chevycowgirl13]

these books would be good for College Writing students to edit! haha

[greatlikeminds]

BRILLIANT idea!! There is so much potential for improvement!

[ninatower93]

Also wonder how many times she said BLIP ....that was annoying..

[greatlikeminds]

56 times!! Geez, I didn't even realise it at the time. I just kept thinking, please don't let this be another Renesemee...

[MissNewKabuki]

And " you are so beautiful Ana" I m mid way through the 3 rd book and I cant stop rolling my eyes, thankfully I can roll my eyes without being spanked.

[greatlikeminds]

That exact phrase is mentioned only 4 times in the 3rd book (still too often, if you ask me), twice in the 2nd, and only once in the first. I just think everything they say and do loses meaning because of all those repetitions. It's like they don't have anything new to say to each other, and they've only known each other for 5 seconds...

LOL - my right to roll my eyes is very important to me, as well.

[melonbabeee2005]

Haha, pretty ridiculous. But I'm like you, I am still reading. Im about 1/4 through the last book right now. Im ready to just find out what happened and Im skipping through all of the sex scenes.

[katrin1984]

"Oh my" (though that also includes all the "Oh my poor Fifty" and "Oh, my underwear is missing" and all that): 1: 50 times 2: 34 times 3: 60 times squirm: 1: 22 times 2: 12 times 3: 31 times fuck: 1, 2, 3: more than 100 (Kindle doesn't count higher) shit: 1: 92 times 2,3: more than 100. This is insane! LOL

[melonbabeee2005]

Oh yea and "shit"

[melonbabeee2005]

How about "oh my", "squirm", and "fuck"

[Starry95Night]

Lol such coincidences :) I've just been relieved to see there really are people out there who don't throw roses at this book, even though I honestly can't ever bash a fellow author. Their book, yes. The author, never. I write science fiction and fantasy. Each with twists of romance, don't worry -- we all got our chick lit sides :) Have you reached the point of querying to agents yet? And yes, adverbs are evil. Of course tthey are. Have you noticed I already used one in this comment?