LYRICS:
[Verse 1]
See you in a hospital bed, I can't remember how to speak
Can't remember the last time I felt so sad.
All I want is to escape this place, I can't stand hospitals, but I
See your face and everything doesn't seem so bad.
[Chorus]
Wanna let you know how I feel, how you're
The only one I've ever said it to.
It may seem silly and all wrong, but I
Picked up a guitar began to play,
Came up with these chords and these words
Don't have much else to say 'bout this,
But it's my cliche love song.
[Verse 2]
See you sitting next to me, I've never felt so much at peace
Can't remember the last time I felt so glad.
All I want is to remain right here in your protective arms.
When I'm with you, nothing ever seems so bad.
(Repeat chorus)
[Bridge]
Times may get hard,
it's just a part of life.
But I'll always love you.
(Chorus 2x)
But it's my cliche love song.
Eww66isbadatsinging is right. this isn't too good. the guitar sounds out of tune and the chords don't really sound in key, plus its just like 3 chords and are not mixing well. her vocals are emotionless. No, I can't post something better but I don't need to in order to express my opinion. I'm not saying I'm better, I'm saying this is not near good-standard. I mean, it's good but could use a lot of pracitce and guitar tuning before you can put it on an album or even expect to get signed.
atvrider41790 10 months ago
Yes! is right, that was a good song.
bakuryu79 2 years ago
no offense, but ur kind of a dickhead. best regards.
kadigurl1 2 years ago
why dont you post something better? no? then STFU
kilika121 2 years ago
ARE YOU PEOPLE FREAKING SERIOUS!!!!!!???? how can you think this is anywhere near good at all? this is like untrimmed fingernails scratching down a chalkboard. please excuse me while i clean the blood out of my ears. and freaking tune your guitar.....well actually never play it again. best regards
Eww66isbadatsinging 2 years ago
cute! :)
thebuenster 2 years ago
I love this! Totally awesome!
Francis9105 2 years ago
I love that you write music :) and you're cute <3
Lidespam 2 years ago
angie, i love it, especially the melody of the chorus. <3
chiquitabanana 2 years ago
i didnt know you write your own songs it is very nice.
has a nice sound.
Kemp10101 2 years ago