My Drama Monologue

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Yes I do realise I have no dramatic talent.

I'm just here for the lols.

It's my year 11 monologue assesment thing and I did write most of the monologue myself although it was based on an idea from a book.

Category:

Entertainment

Tags:

• drama
• sgghs
• beckyy
• monologue
• yr11
• brick.

[LankyMelman]

She's annoying. Could only stand a minute of it sorry :|

[Cancerophobia]

You can still tell you're just speaking what you've read on the page. You also move a LOT more than you need to.. Like you.. move to the other seat.. but why? Why would the character walk there... ? People move TOO much and you don't need to stand up and pace to get marks for physical. I don't really like the way you used the scarf either, but it's quite clever.

[nejlikan19]

hi, i was wondering what monologue this is, have you wrote it or what´s the deal?

[Nasha743]

your speaking lines, in real life people don't talk like this you need to put meaning behind your words, it sounds like your reading of a sheet.

[beckiefrances]

you move too much, only move if you have a purpose.

[Steph1Shan]

What monologue is it??

[LittleRedDrum]

Omfg put your hair back next time youre gonna play with it like that!!!

[shannonsiskk]

needs movement, seemes staged, no characterization and truthful eyes. work on it though!

[09ozdemir]

@leidaxo haha great tip!

[dieselvisel]

You can always learn.

[leidaxo]

heres a tip BREATH !