Sasuke... I'm not coming back...

READ THIS OR IT WON'T MAKE SENSE TO YOU!

Finally got the sound back thanks to this:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_lVVZsJNfDE&feature=related

THIS INFO IS JUST FOR SHIKAMARUSGIRL
I used WMM and Naruto (obviously) and I want to be judged in the "Filled with regret" sub-division. Thank you a lot!



This is my first story amv, where I completely made up a scenario and followed it.
It starts with a flash forward. Sasuke is upset and crying over Naruto's dead body. Who knows how he died? find out later.
Back to present time. Naruto saved Sasuke's life and Naruto gets his Kyuubi sealed.
Naruto fights Kiba in the Chuunin exam. He wins the fight, even though he can't use the Kyuubi. Things aren't that bad yet.
Sasuke fights Gaara in the Chuunin exam and he wins his fight. Gaara then attacks Naruto.
Without the Kyuubi, Naruto can't beat an actually strong opponent and loses.
Soon, Itachi comes and attacks Sasuke. Naruto tries to help, but he can't use the Kyuubi's chakra. So Naruto is forced to watch his friend being brutally attacked.
Flashback. Naruto remembers when he and the Kyuubi beat Haku.
Back to the present, Sasuke is beaten by Itachi still.
Naruto packs his bags and runs away because he is a burden. Sasuke looks for him (you can see it for about .2 seconds) and finds him. Naruto is mad that he followed and punches him out. (you can't hear, but) Naruto tells Sasuke that he thinks that he himself is a burden and is sorry. Sasuke punches and they fight.
Naruto soon gets the Kyuubi back (I promise I would've done better here, but I ran out of time) and Sasuke wants to stop fighting, but Naruto has no control. They keep fighting until Sasuke kills Naruto. Sasuke feels awful and remembers back when Naruto saves his life (woah, a cycle)

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• Naruto
• Sasuke
• amv
• WMM
• Kings
• Studios

[xhezairZ1]

ermmmm xcept the story there was nothing special.

[TankEngineMadman]

Something weird is going on where I can't tell if I've commented already or not, so sorry if I sent you two.

You said it in a really nasty way, but I agree, not that great.

I missed a ton of beats, the sync is only ok, and it has like 5 effects total.

I was entering a contest which was closing that day, and I wasn't finished. The last about half or so was done in one hour, and I'm a really slow editor. So I REALLY rushed it. Sorry you didn't like it. I feel disappointed myself.

[HoboGeneral]

an excelent amv

good timing and a decent story

now there were only a few problems. first off, to show memories you should change the film just like when you write a storie it would be in italicies. second while you had a story it seemed like too much shoved intoa 3 minute period. one important part about the story element to an amv is that the reader can understand it without reading your comments.

but enough of my bitching, great amv 5/5

[TankEngineMadman]

Wow, thanks

I tried using the blur effect for the time changes (not Haku though, I forgot), next time I'll try sepia or something because it just looks like my quality is low when I use blur.

Yeah, I put a lot of stuff for 3 minutes, lots of it only shows up for a second or so. I'm gonna work on clarity of the story, because I had to write this out like 5 times, NEVER AGAIN.

Thanks for the advice, and the rating, you've really helped me to become as good as I am now, and hopefully better later.

[whatever51]

Wow man, this was really good. You obviously put in a lot of effort, it definitely paid off. 5/5

[TankEngineMadman]

Wow, thanks. The last minute or so would've been a lot better, but I wanted to enter it in a contest which was closing in about an hour, so I had to rush. Thanks a lot

[somedudenamedjoe]

Great job.

[TankEngineMadman]

I didn't like that one. That was before I became serious at all about amvs. I'm just glad cause that's when I was invited to my studio.

[shadowlusterx]

Just saw it, it's really good, but I liked your other AMVs more, mainly your Collapse one. Probably becasuse I didn't really like this song. It's still great though.

[TankEngineMadman]

Thanks, I'll check it out. If it's free, that would be best.