Lust Interest by J. Neff Lind (def poetry style)

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Uploaded by on Mar 7, 2008

I noticed how popular the def poetry jam videos were on this site, so I thought I'd write a 'performance poem.' Hope it pleases. JNeffLind at Gmail dot com

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  • Jesus H. Christ, man.. I've never really been into poetry, but this is amazing.

    Sorry it took me so long to finally get to your channel, J; I have a shitty memory. I'll most definitely be checking up on the rest of your work very soon.

    This is Kory from your Speech class last semester, by the way.

  • Thanks for viewing and commenting man.  I appreciate the support.

  • yo this is a great poem.

  • Thanks to everyone who commented. Sorry if my performance wasn't so enthusiastic, but I'm a writer not a performer. I'll have a couple shots before I do the next one. Check out my channel for more if you like.

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  • good writing!

  • It was good. Great content!

  • Great writing! Great flow.

    I think physical depth would help with the monotonous delivery. You stand stuck between a camera and a wall. You need space to explore, similar to if you were on stage. Once your feet feel free to explore, your voice may follow.

  • nice man. potent lyrics.

    If you could find a better way to execute. its just a little monotone. but really good stuff man. impressive.

  • good shit!!

  • You're in your prime, when it comes to your rhyme!

    Haha, that's the best I can do. =P

    Great job. =)

  • Dope flow,

    But the monotone has got to go.

    I like this poet song a lot,

    Sucky, is something this is not.

    Just work on your breathin,

    And in this poetry you will be leadin.

    You're doing great,

    Just continue to create!

  • NEAT RHYME.

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