Lust Interest by J. Neff Lind (def poetry style)
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All Comments (35)
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good writing!
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It was good. Great content!
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Great writing! Great flow.
I think physical depth would help with the monotonous delivery. You stand stuck between a camera and a wall. You need space to explore, similar to if you were on stage. Once your feet feel free to explore, your voice may follow.
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nice man. potent lyrics.
If you could find a better way to execute. its just a little monotone. but really good stuff man. impressive.
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good shit!!
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You're in your prime, when it comes to your rhyme!
Haha, that's the best I can do. =P
Great job. =)
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Dope flow,
But the monotone has got to go.
I like this poet song a lot,
Sucky, is something this is not.
Just work on your breathin,
And in this poetry you will be leadin.
You're doing great,
Just continue to create!
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NEAT RHYME.
Jesus H. Christ, man.. I've never really been into poetry, but this is amazing.
Sorry it took me so long to finally get to your channel, J; I have a shitty memory. I'll most definitely be checking up on the rest of your work very soon.
This is Kory from your Speech class last semester, by the way.
Stuemke 3 years ago
Thanks for viewing and commenting man. I appreciate the support.
JNeffLind 3 years ago
yo this is a great poem.
SyndicateGeneral 4 years ago
Thanks to everyone who commented. Sorry if my performance wasn't so enthusiastic, but I'm a writer not a performer. I'll have a couple shots before I do the next one. Check out my channel for more if you like.
JNeffLind 4 years ago