'Its the weirdest thing. I feel like I've been i a coma for the longest time and Im just now waking up'
I sank into the deep of my bed sheets,tightly wrapped around me. My thoughts left my head and...
'Its the weirdest thing. I feel like I've been i a coma for the longest time and Im just now waking up' I sank into the deep of my bed sheets,tightly wrapped around me. My thoughts left my head and grabbed onto her breakable body like a weak mans hands,though they couldnt reach her. She was laying right infront of me,only covered by dark red rose petals.The contrast of the rose petals and her lightly tanned skin made me shiver.It send a shock trough my whole body,making me sit up. I swung my legs out of the bed and felt her eyes follow every movement of mine. My stiff legs straightened and I was now standing over her,the longing of touching her stronger than ever. Her lips whispered my name. "Nick,come here",she said and moved in the rose petals. I took a step closer to her and kneeled down next to her. I took her small hand in mine and she sat up aswell. Her greenish blue eyes bored themselves through mine.How could she have that affect on me? I didnt understand but I wasnt thinking at this very point. My fingertips ran up her arm to her shoulder blade and I held onto her tightly. Her eyes sparkled with excitement as she touched my face and ran her fingers over my lips. "Your so beautiful", she whispered and leaned in to kiss me. I felt something on my shoulder.A rose petal. She giggled and pressed her lips to mine. Her lips,just as soft as I always imagined.Perfect moisture.Our lips fit together like two pieces of a puzzle and as she moved hers on mine,the sensation of being loved filled my body from head to toe. I felt my hairs stand up on my arms as she lightly sucked on my bottom lip. My hands found their way to her waist and I pulled her closer to me,laying her down in the bed of rose petals,not braking the kiss.I knotted my hand through her light brown,silky hair. I've never experienced something that intense. It made me sick..a good sick.Like dancing fireflies inside of my body. "You dont know how beautiful you are to me,Miley. You are everything I ever wanted..and too much to ask for. Your making me lose control,your driving me insane with your never ending beauty. I would give you the world and the universe if I could",I whispered with my lips still lingering over hers.Her hot break was making me want more and more but I knew I didnt deserve her. "Your just..spectacular!",I felt so small.Like she was too good for me and I knew she was but I enjoyed the feeling of meaning something to her and sharing this moment with her and no one else. I felt one of her fingers on my lips and she shushed. She had this heart-melting smile on her face and it stunned me enough to fill my life with joy. I never even wasted a thought in anything else but her. "If I wouldnt know how amazing your singing voice is..I would say the way you talk is the prettiest thing I have ever heard.Like birds on a sunday morning.But not the annoying ones",she winked and started playing with my curls as this voice came into my head. It was a low humming at first but then it sounded like talking. A lot of people talking in my head but it sound familiar. I pushed myself up and looked at her confused. She still had that smile on her face and the farther I moved away from her, the bigger got her smile.
I felt the bed sheets underneath me again and it was quiet again.Too quiet. I still saw Miley laying there,with her hand extended,balled into a fist. Her beauty lighting up the whole room.My words arent enough.I cant explain what I felt in this moment but as her fingers slowly moved up,I was afraid. One finger up..I started to shake out of the fear that I would wake up.Two fingers up..I would never see her again.Three fingers up and I felt everything getting a bit darker than usual.Four fingers up and my eyes started to water.I couldnt lose her.Five fingers up and I knew I fell in love.
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You are an amazing writer but if you are entering this in a contest, I would have someone re-read it for you and make corrections, Just a little hint.
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good story :)
love the end :)
[in a good way]
Please write a book. Your Amazing!