Much Better: Jonas Brother Fan Fiction Chapter 1

I started writing this story in February and finally decided to post. Please comment, I really would like to know what you think.
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It's Wednesday, a beautiful Sunny early spring day, but this is the Los Angeles Area of course it's sunny. A silver Solstice with British Columbia plates drives slowly in the right lane, though the tree lined streets of Toluca Lake. The driver glances in the rear veiw mirror to see a White SUV rapidly approaches from behind.
It swiftly moves to the left to pass, one of the occupants exclaims "Looks like somebody's lost!" A second one adds "Yeah, out of town plates, but sweet ride." The driver asks "Can you see who's drivin'?" His two passengers peer through their tinted windows to see if they can catch a glimpse of the other vehicles driver. The one in the back seat says with a grin "I see... Oooh... Red Hair.... and Shades.... I can't really see her face though." From the passenger seat the other replies "Yeah, her head is turned, must be looking for something, I can't get a good look." The driver asks "Are you sure it was a girl?" From the backseat he gets a swat up the side of the head "Dude, I know a girl when I see one!" The drive yells "Oww... Joe! How many times do I have to tell you don't hit me while I'm driving, you wanna kill us all?" Joe, replies angrily, from the backseat "Well then don't question my ability to spot a hot girl, Kevin!" Kevin signals and moves the SUV back into the right lane. He replies "I wasn't questioning your ability it's just in LA unless you get a good look you can't tell sometimes. Nick, back me up on this, please?" Nick, who is in the passenger seat, raises his hands replying " Don't get me involved in this argument, its a no win. " Joe looks out the rear window trying to see if he can see the car, but all he can see is the Yellow Hummer that is behind them now. "Well it looks like we'll never know anyways cus' were almost home." Kevin states. He signals and turns right through the gates marking the exclusive comunity. They drive down the shaded Boulevard and make another right a few blocks further down. They turn into a driveway of a beautiful Californian home. Pulling into the driveway Nick points to a similar house diagonally across the street from them. "Hey! Someone's moving in." His Brothers look over and see a Moving Truck backed into the long driveway.

Joe climbs out of the SUV and walks over to the side of their property and peers through the bushes at the house across the street. He says, as his brothers approach "Well, I sure hope its someone Interesting. It would be nice to have some eye candy for a change." Kevin looks at him with disgust "Joe, youre a Pig!" Joe smiles a toothy grin, and stands up straighter "Yes, but a good looking one who all the girls love." Kevin looks at a smirking Nick and they both shake their heads in disbelief.

A car drives along the street pass them. Joe taps Nick on the shoulder "Dude, it's that car again." They watch as it drives up the street and then turns around, and comes back towards them. It slowly comes to a stop against the curb in front of the house. Joe says excitedly "Maybe she's our new neighbour." Kevin grins not taking his eyes away from the car "Way to state the obvious, Brainiac." Nick looks around at their surroundings, peeking thought the bushes and asks "You guys get the feeling were on safari? I feel like we should be whispering ....as the gazelle drinks quietly from the watering hole, the lion sneaks up on her to pounce...." Kevin laughs and taps Nick on the shoulder "Yeah, and Joe's the Lion. Look at him." Nick glances over at Joe bouncing up and down with anticipation. Joe turns to them "Whaaatttt? A guy can't bounce."

Their attention is returned to the car as they hear the engine shut off. Standing staring as the drivers door opens, wide they see a pair of high stiletto boots swing out onto the pavement.........
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[sillysocks407]

"I wasn't questioning your ability it's just in LA unless you get a good look you can't tell sometimes. xD bahahahahhahahahaha

"Whaaatttt? A guy can't bounce."

even better!! i cant wait to get to the next chapter.

[JBfiction11587]

@sillysocks407 Thanks glad you're enjoying it so far. xD

[sunsetlovex]

holy macaroni. this is your first chapter?! it's amazing. :) i love when joe says, what? a guy can't bounce. :) so cute.

[JBfiction11587]

@sunsetlovex Thanks i thought that line was cute too. XD

[craker1s1]

HAHA! Wow! Where was i when you first posted this?! oh yeah i didnt read jb stories then!=\ haha did i miss out atleast i can read them now! yay! LMFAO haha! could not stop laughing while i read this epy! "are you sure it was a girl" "I wasn't questioning your ability it's just in LA unless you get a good look you can't tell sometimes." XD ok what does that mean kevin?? are you saying that from personal expirience? HAHA! LOVE IT! and im just getting started ! soo i cant wait for whats ahead!8'D

[JBfiction11587]

@craker1s1 Well it's great that you're here now XD.

Yeah I think that Kevin might have had a couple mistaken identity experiences. ;D

Glad I made you laugh, This story has a few chapters like that. ;)

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[JBfiction11587]

Damn right he is... xD

Thanks

[JBfiction11587]

Happy to have you reading and enjoying it. :D

Take your time. I realize there is a lot to catch up on. XD