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[AN. I put the wrong name for Kevins girlfriend in the last chapter, it was supposed to be Kelly not Julie I edited it so I hope that doesnt confuse anyone! Thanks for the nice comments on my cliffy last chapter, I thought it was okay I have WAY BETTER ones planned, *insert evil laugh here* lol. So read chapter 12 and find out what happened!!!
Song in vid: Lovebug by JBI LOVE this song, lol.]

Recap:
Kevin: Fine. *he eats it, gags then swallows.* God, I have to wash my mouth out before I throw up! *he runs up the stairs*
Rachel:*calling after him* DRAMA KING!!
Nick:*laughing* Okay Rachel. I have a dare for you. *pauses* I dare you to kiss Joe.
Rachel:...


Chapter 12

*Rachels POV*

Rachel: Fine. *I was sitting sideways on the couch, facing Joe so I leaned forward and gave him a quick kiss on the cheek* Done.
Nick: What?!? That doesnt count!!
Rachel: Yes it does. *as we were arguing Joe was sitting in between us just watching and Kevin was still upstairs probably cutting his tongue off, lol* And why Joe?
Nick: You two are the only single ones and you were saying earlier that no one has ever told you if you were a good kisser or not. *shrugs and raises his eyebrows in a challenge*
Rachel:*I thought about it for a second* You know whatfine.
Nick & Joe: Fine what?

*I suddenly swung my leg over Joes so I had my knees on either side of his hips. Before Joe had time to react my lips were on his. When our lips met the sparks flew, well at least for me. I dont know if Joe felt what I was feeling too but he was kissing me back. My god, he is an AMAZING kisser. It was the perfect kiss, no tongue, sweet and kind of light, our lips moving together. I pulled away and sat back down in my original seat. Joe looked a little shocked, but I like to be unpredictable. I looked over at Nick and he looked kind of shocked too, lol.*

*Joes POV*

*Wow.*

*Rachels POV, again*

Rachel: So*before I could finish my thought ,Kevins yelling interrupted me*
Kevin:*yelling from upstairs* Rachel, your mom is on the phone!!!
Rachel:*yelling back* Okay! *I smiled at the boys, who were still kind of frozen and ran upstairs to see what my mom wanted.*

*Normal POV*

Kevin:*2 minutes later, walks downstairs* Hey guys, Rachel said to tell you bye, she had to go home for dinner.
Nick: Okay.
Kevin:*sits back down in his chair and looks at Joe, who still hasnt moved; to Nick* Whats with him? *referring to Joe*
Nick:*simply states* Oh, Rachel kissed him.
Kevin: What?!?! Why?
Nick: I dared her to.
Kevin: Nick! *slaps him upside the back for his head* You cant do that.
Nick:* rubbing his head* First, ouch man, that hurt. Second, she didnt care, I reminded her that earlier she said no one had ever told her if she was a good kisser or not, then she said fine and kissed him. On the lips. For like 15 seconds, dudeshe sooo likes him. *They kept talking about it like Joe wasnt still sitting there, and truthfully he couldnt even hear them, he was thinking about the kiss, what it meant, if anything. While they were talking Nick got a text from Rachel.*
*Text*
R: Dont worry, I told ur mom & dad the blonde hair thing was a dare, their cool ; )

*Nick let out a sigh of relief then nudged Joe in the rib, effectively waking him from his thoughts*

Joe:*snaps* What?!
Nick: I was asking if she was a good kisser or not?
Joe:..

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[AN. BAM!!!!! Ha ha another cliffy, lol. Yeah this one was short but I needed it to end there or I would just keep writing and the chapter would have like 7 parts lolthats a long chapter. So did Rachel react how you thought she would? How do think Joe feels? How is Joe going to answer Nicks question? Will Rachel and Joe start dating? Who will win the bet? Dont remember what bet Im talking about reread previous chapters, I not sure which chapter its in ,sorry. OMJ, guess what I was doodling in class because I was bored like usual and I drew a cookie on my folder, it made me happy! AND I just ate a Blow Pop it was delicious.and now Im sad because Im listening to Nick sing A Little Bit LongerWho saw Extreme Makeover? it made me cry that Nick dedicated the song to the family and then the little boy talking about being thankful *tear*. Okay I think this is official the longest authors note ever, XD. Comment, rate, and subscribe, it makes me happy and want to type more chapters *wink nudge* =D
~Rachel aka depplove23]

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  • haha 'kissed her for the first time yesterday' ;p

  • omg I totally did realize that was one of the lyrics when I put it as the song for the kiss chapter.

    I really should pay attention to these kind of things

  • no rachel is definitly a bad kisser :P! LOL IM JOKING! DONT SLAP ME!

    omj wow im like totally crazy right now and its 8 30 in the morning! which i really werid cuz im not a morning person! HAHA

    -lindsay

  • lmao XD

    what in the world were you doing up at 830am on a Saturday..you are CRAZY!!!!! :)

  • i am CRAZY! haha im up so early because im sooo used to get up really early most of the week! and once i get up its soo hard to get back to sleep! and for some reason i was really hyper that day! HAHA

    -lindsay

  • lol i have to get up during the week too and it sucks so i sleep in really late on the weekends =)

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  • ok first i love the movie Benny & Joon and second i saw that episode of extreme makeover it was so sad i loved it though!!!

  • lucky! i just cant! its the stupidest thing! like in the summer i sleep till 12 and im like so energized lol!

    -lindsay

  • okay good cause all my friends make fun of me for saying dude all the time lol

  • i know JB are like the sweetest ppl ever

    lol cliffies make me sad too thats why im typing chapter 13 right now!!!

    it will be posted in parts b/c its wayyy too long for youtube

    im typing in word and ive got like 3 1/2 pages so far lol

    chp 13(all parts) should be up with in the next 2-3 hours i think so yay!!!

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