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She didn't, but last night after I went and said Goodnight, when I was back in my room. It was so quiet... but I couldn't sleep... all I could think about was her. So I picked up my guitar and started strumming. I realized I was playing her song. It was surreal really, I'd only heard it just the once, but it was there, every note, every cord. The words just came it was so natural." Tracey's eyes were tearing up "Awe... that's so... so... Awe..." she wipes her fingers across her cheek. Kevin grins nodding "That's why I want her to hear it first. I guess the timing was just right, it's the only explanation I have." Nick pats his brothers shoulder proudly "She's gonna Love it. I'm sure.... But way to show me up... what do you think Colleen's gonna expect ?" he says the last part though a laugh. Kevin smiles relieved "Not my problem Bro, Not My Problem." He yawns, and Joe laughs "But you being a total Zombie from lack of sleep, this is your Problem! You better wake up, we gotta be charming in 5 and we have a show tonight or did you forget you're a Rock Star!" Kevin laughs "How could I with you reminding me all the time! I'll be fine. I'll try and nap before show time." Nick scoffs "Like that's gonna happen!" The SUV slows and comes to a stop in front of the radio station, there are a few fans waiting by the front doors of the building. Nick reaches forward and pats Joe's shoulder "Ready to be a Rock Star there Bro?" "When am I never Ready!" He replies cockily with a wink at Tracey. She laughs and rolls her eyes "Did I say I was impressed... NOT!" just then the SUV door opens, and the fans start screaming.
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I just like to say that I'm really happy with how this chapter turned out. I just started writing and before i knew it I loved it... which acutally doesn't happen that often. So please tell me what you think by commenting. I really appreciate it. ;)

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  • lol i loved it!!! i cant wait for more! :D

  • @tumblingtalyssa01 you won't have to wait for long. ;D

  • OMYGOS ANN. I LOE IT TOO. WE ARE SO ALIKE IT'S SARY. okay sligt issue, tis souldn't be full of spelling errors but my letter 'sea' and um... one between g^j isn't working on my keyboard for some reason. Lmao tis omment is so freaking awkward xD oo and oters aren't working eiter. tis is wonderful!

  • @LovinTheNileyLoveX1 LMAFO..... I had such a good time decoding your comment... Maybe we should have a secret code and write all our messages like that..... oh on second thought lets not and say we did. :p

    or sould i say 'on seond tougt lets not.' lol

  • @JBfiction11587 don't make fun of my shitty keyboard! lmao xD

  • @LovinTheNileyLoveX1 lol I wasn't making fun I was having fun there's a big difference. Because you know i luv you Emily so it's all done with a big HUG attached. XD

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  • @kayleigh753 Always trust your gut feelings... they will never steer you wrong.

  • aww, i hope vicki doesnt ruin everything, i have a feeling she will...

  • @JBLuvStorys It should be something special. xD

  • I love it :D

    I cant wait for Kevin to play Lisa that song, its gonna be amazing and Im pretty sure she'll love it :)

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