Liked the concept of sorrow at their father's death. The boy looked to be a very interesting character, I hope he continues to develop into a fascinating lead character for the plot.
Keep it short. Very moving at the beginning but lost all its momentum after the "Faith Shattered" bit.
Careful with scenes with "the answer" to really tough life questions. They rarely engender a positive response from people struggling with this kind of thing.
I did not understand the connection with the family at the end. The kids seemed solo and then suddenly a part of another family.
The music did not fit the recorded audio, which was distracting.
Liked the concept of sorrow at their father's death. The boy looked to be a very interesting character, I hope he continues to develop into a fascinating lead character for the plot.
BanorRealms 3 years ago
Keep it short. Very moving at the beginning but lost all its momentum after the "Faith Shattered" bit.
Careful with scenes with "the answer" to really tough life questions. They rarely engender a positive response from people struggling with this kind of thing.
I did not understand the connection with the family at the end. The kids seemed solo and then suddenly a part of another family.
The music did not fit the recorded audio, which was distracting.
Some good cinematography. -Luke
TomySky 3 years ago
I would love to see this trailer turn into a film! Great work!
littlexerox 3 years ago