Room Haiku

Here is my mattress
Theres a dent in the middle
When did that get there..

Milo says hello
We have a lot in common
And this is his friend

I have a bookcase
It holds pictures, books.. a fork..
This is really old

What the heck are these?
Oh.. just palm trees.. false alarm
Now what, now what.. ah

This is sort of mine
I put my laundry on it
Who sits on sofas?

Im very bad at this
So I think Ill end it now
Sorry Dustin, bye!

.... Yeah, i didn't notice until everything was done, but that last haiku ... isn't in fact a haiku.. one syllable too long x.X heh..

Category:

Comedy

Tags:

• tsud143
• haiku
• failure

[maggieeex3]

hahah I like the haikus! and it's funny that the line in which you said you were bad at haikus was the line that you messed up xD

[thelockerhobo]

lolol, right!? .. i mean .. that was totally intentional.. just me being clever ...

[mohatuja8]

Hobo! This is so random, but funny! :P

[thelockerhobo]

xD thanks! it's actually supposed to be a video response to tsud123 's haiku

[duzknmm]

I like this expression "Milo says hello" :)

[thelockerhobo]

:D thank you!

[hypebeastJ]

milo's friend!! hahaha.. this should be an "hp" commercial

[Gensaiyuki]

i like your haiku. so simple yet interesting. :3

[Iz69]

What the heck are these?

Oh.. just palm trees.. false alarm

i like these lines.

[thelockerhobo]

hahah thanks olivier :P

[thelockerhobo]

thanks! ^^ Milo says he likes you too! hahaha i knoww so bluee xD